Grandeur of Fall

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Fall leaves tumble to their slipshod decay, oozing from the crowns of tedious trees. A mephitic scrunch with their latter sway, as they are raked into wide whisking seas. Coral-hued yew berries grace the yard's path, late hollyhocks, and sunflowers shine bright. Marigolds adorn door homes with gold lath, thorn twigs in crimson holes dapple faxed sight. As the bounty of nature sparks strange start, saffron periwinkle countless bright shades. Giving a boost to the Fall grandeur art; the hues of oak trees fluctuate by glades. Topaz leaves stuck in a sapphire whisk breeze; fall reveals deep facts, a sprint ember squeeze.

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Date: 12/16/2023 2:13:00 PM
Beautifully written. Melodic and graceful. Congrats Sotto on your top placement.
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Date: 12/16/2023 12:28:00 PM
Dear Sotto, congratulations for your placement in the contest. Your poem is just exquisite. Wonderful imagery Sonnet. I can feel the Grandeur of Fall in my my mind, with all those trees painting colours around us, that now are waiting for the next dress to wear. It will be a while until there, meanwhile let us enjoy with your creativity. Thanks a lot Sotto, for describing so well the beauty of life. Blessings!
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Date: 12/16/2023 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful Las. I love the almost lyrics nature of the sonnet. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/16/2023 3:34:00 AM
Just wonderful
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Date: 12/16/2023 2:51:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting as well as the photo, making me vicariously behold the grandeur of Fall, since I live in an "Autumnless" country. Thanks likewise for my placement in your latest contest. God bless you.
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Date: 12/15/2023 7:01:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery in your sonnet, Sotto: such movement and color…like in this line,” Topaz leaves stuck in a sapphire whisk breeze; wonderful work. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 12/15/2023 2:02:00 PM
I knew this sonnet would do well my friend.. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.
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Date: 12/15/2023 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations Sotto! Your Autumn poem "The Grandeur of Fall," has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 12/15/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Emile, much appreciate your placement and comment on my poem. Blessings my friend.
Date: 12/11/2023 8:50:00 PM
If your poems are studied in detail, one can double one's vocabulary and word power. Your range of words and images are limitless. A beautiful poem on the grandeur of Fall. With coral hued yew berries, hollyhocks, marigolds and sunflowers, what a splendid scene you have created. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 12/11/2023 1:15:00 PM
Absolutely stunning sonnet Sotto so much wonderful lines and i really liked this stanza.. Coral-hued yew berries grace the yard's path, late hollyhocks, and sunflowers shine bright. Marigolds adorn door homes with gold lath, thorn twigs in crimson holes dapple faxed sight.. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/11/2023 11:54:00 AM
How glorious and beautiful is your sonnet dr sotto. I absolutely love the way you’ve written this. Your rhymes and descriptive imagery is beyond impeccable and so captivating! I especially love “ Coral-hued yew berries grace the yard's path, late hollyhocks, and sunflowers shine bright.“ how gorgeous! I love your use of various shades of autumn too. So colourful and stunning. Autumn looks wonderful through your words. And im sure this will score high. Goodluck, pleasure always reading your work.
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