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Poetry/Sonnet/Grandeur of Fall
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1596-902-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Grandeur of Fall
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged, 12/15/2023

Fifth Place

"Every leaf speaks bliss to me fluttering from the autumn tree." Quote by _Emily Bronte I love how each majestic tree will grow, how each season is a moment in time; and how each grand tree- her hued colors show, oh, sparrow's chirrup and on a branch chime. The dappled leaves a painted veil above, brimming with song birds singing so happy; a solitary soul with trees I love, gathering the gold- squirrels are snappy. There is no gloom in the grandeur of Fall, oh, how the honey breath just reaches out; but there is decaying of big and small, on the ground red, gold jewels lay about. Trees go to sleep to wake eternally; but they still stand on guard externally.

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Karen Jones

Date: 12/16/2023 2:18:00 PM

Lovely fall write. Congratulations on your top placement.

Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2023 5:28:00 PM

Karen, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/16/2023 7:59:00 AM

This is just lovely, Constance, from your snappy squirrel to your honey breath. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2023 12:19:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings

Terry Miller

Date: 12/16/2023 3:29:00 AM

Excellent sonnet, congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2023 12:20:00 PM

Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/15/2023 7:12:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery, Constance: Your love for nature and trees shines through your words. Congratulatiions. On your winning place. SuZ

Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2023 12:20:00 PM

Suz, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 1:53:00 PM

A lovely sonnet Constance.. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2023 4:19:00 PM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Emile Pinet

Date: 12/15/2023 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations Constance! Your Autumn poem "The Grandeur of Fall", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2023 4:20:00 PM

Emile, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/12/2023 8:28:00 AM

This is such a beautiful autumnal poem dear Constance. Love the title, stunning picture and you’ve also quoted one of my all time favourite classic writers. Such glorious, vivid imagery and many exquisite lines to form this wonderful sonnet, ‘ how each season is a moment in time’ ‘ the dappled leaves a painted veil above’. The volta is beautifully expressed too. Good luck in the contest. So enjoyed reading this as always. Hugs to you xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2023 2:37:00 PM

Christina, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and compliment, and the encouragement, appreciate and blessings