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Poetry/Sonnet/Grandeur of Fall
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1596-902-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Grandeur of Fall
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged, 12/15/2023

Fifth Place

Grandeur of Fall

 
"Every leaf speaks bliss to me fluttering from the autumn tree." Quote by _Emily Bronte I love how each majestic tree will grow, how each season is a moment in time; and how each grand tree- her hued colors show, oh, sparrow's chirrup and on a branch chime. The dappled leaves a painted veil above, brimming with song birds singing so happy; a solitary soul with trees I love, gathering the gold- squirrels are snappy. There is no gloom in the grandeur of Fall, oh, how the honey breath just reaches out; but there is decaying of big and small, on the ground red, gold jewels lay about. Trees go to sleep to wake eternally; but they still stand on guard externally.
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Jones Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Lovely fall write. Congratulations on your top placement.
La France Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 5:28 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Fowler Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 7:59 AM
This is just lovely, Constance, from your snappy squirrel to your honey breath. Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings
Miller Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Excellent sonnet, congratulations.
La France Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Delaney Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Constance: Your love for nature and trees shines through your words. Congratulatiions. On your winning place. SuZ
La France Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Suz, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings
One Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 1:53 PM
A lovely sonnet Constance.. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Pinet Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your Autumn poem "The Grandeur of Fall", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Emile, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Bowring Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:28 AM
This is such a beautiful autumnal poem dear Constance. Love the title, stunning picture and you’ve also quoted one of my all time favourite classic writers. Such glorious, vivid imagery and many exquisite lines to form this wonderful sonnet, ‘ how each season is a moment in time’ ‘ the dappled leaves a painted veil above’. The volta is beautifully expressed too. Good luck in the contest. So enjoyed reading this as always. Hugs to you xx
La France Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Christina, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and compliment, and the encouragement, appreciate and blessings
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