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Our time is finite on this earth- we never know, from time of birth, the day that life ebbs at low tide- the hour we'll end our life-long ride. Our days build up like grains of sand some lost to wind or slipped thru hand; washed back to sea, or castles made- or long-ignored in the dark shade. The waves of life roll on the shore- grains multiply; each wave brings more. Our beach grows deep with every grain- the ones of joy, the ones of pain. As grains may shift with every storm- more sturdy, deeper banks they form. In those that rest as graceful mounds- life's sweet tranquility abounds. Hope those who trod upon our space will feel the glory of God's grace as our grains build, reshape, pursue to do the best that they can do. And when the final ebb tide comes, we'll tally up our optimums, and pray the beach we leave behind can be the best we have designed. May 22, 2019 Contest: Your Selection Again Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/14/2023 10:13:00 AM
Amazing Sandra. This flows so smoothly and liltingly. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2023 5:31:00 PM
I so much appreciate your uplifting comment, and congratulations, Linda! Thank you! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/14/2020 11:10:00 AM
Wow Sandra, this is absolutely awesome! It has such a wonderful rhythm and flow to it and rolls off the tongue effortlessly. Poetry like this should be shared with the world. I'm so thankful you posted this beauty and that it was honored most deservedly with 1st place. This gem is going straight into my Faves! Mahalo xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:08:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/6/2019 8:58:00 PM
Beautiful write Sandra, congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:54:00 PM
A belated thank you, John, for your visit and lovely comments. Sandra
Date: 6/6/2019 11:50:00 AM
"Like grains of sand we shift with storms of life", Beautifully penned Sandra, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/11/2019 3:54:00 PM
A belated thank you, Joseph, for the great contest and my nice placement, along with your very positive comment! Sandra :)
Date: 5/26/2019 9:34:00 PM
An effective metaphor, that you have developed beautifully, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:53:00 PM
A belated thank you, Geoffrey, for your visit and very uplifting and supportive comment! Sandra :)

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