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Gradually

We waited many years the few of us that are left In our minds we couldn't imagine the surface on our earth so reft What we knew before we will never know again That man can be so destructive, and no one ever gains Slowly we start to climb the steps to a world we knew What element of view awaits as we step into anew The sealed doors to our mountain safe-way creak against the quiet Our hearts beat in-trepidation as we await their impending riot Through the door we go into a landscape we read about in books Do we appreciate what we have survived, so alive to be able to look We look out across the valley once lush like a carpet of greens What we see before us we knew as out of this world martian scenes The town that we knew and loved has disappeared from view Now replaced by open sores as they spill their molten spew The sun is but a blur through a darkened dusty haze What little oxygen presents, appears to fuel this fiery display As we head down towards where our town was, very little of it remains Collapsed and buried buildings our view is now en-grained Skeletal metal frames as if molded by a sculptor's torch Rocks melted into a glaze, by the bombs inevitable scorch Many miles we now have walked through our barren radiated lands Was it to be from the dawn of time that this moment was in our plans As we head back to our mountain safe-way, looking back down our valley It will be many many years, like it was, but we'll get there gradually http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-18.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/20/2011 7:23:00 AM
Skilly write, James! Enjoyed the read of your so well penned poem! Have a braw time, dear Highlander! And thank you for your kind comment!...Gert
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:49:00 PM
After an apocalypse the scenes you describe could very well be accurate descriptions, James. I would hate to be alive if and when this happens, but at least you left a few survivors to replenish and rebuild in the last verse. This is science fiction at its finest and a favorite for me, Highlander. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:30:00 AM
Very powerfu poem and subject. Liked the rhythm also. Philip Wylie book from years ago. Worked for the government, they do have those mountain sites.
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:59:00 AM
wonderfully written, lets hope not too prophetic though
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:21:00 AM
Only bits and pieces of what was James! Thanks for your gracious comment. I'm of the american native descent myself, so in a way I guess I was defending that. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:09:00 AM
And you from time to time rant of mine writes !!! Here is true essence of 'klore ! Great write dear poet ! much love, james *fol=a following 'klore= a legened; tradition
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:43:00 AM
Very good rhythm and rhyme..Got my attention and drew me in..I am glad that I chose this one today...Looking forward to that Bar-be-que with that special sauce..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:19:00 AM
Gradually is sometimes all we have to look forward too.. You have orbed me into another dimension with this write, stunning imagery once again ;)
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:14:00 AM
Well done, James....the decriptions here are stunning. I remember the episode of Twilight Zone, that Robert mentions in his comment below....a gripping story, just as your poem suggests. Well done!
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:52:00 AM
Time enough at last. Your description of a post-apocalyptic world reminds me of Burgess Meredith climbing out of the bank vault so he can finally read all of his books. You have good descriptiveness and rhyming in this presentation.
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