Graceful Sky

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Peculiar grazing through hills and valleys A wide smile is seen in liminal space Awaken the graceful sky's surging keys Peculiar forage through hills and valleys As I cry, nodes clear and float in alleys On abyss wings, that luscious smile face Peculiar grazing through hills and valleys A wide smile is seen in liminal space. Written: March 01, 2023

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/2/2023 12:02:00 PM

Marvelously done, my dear friend, Lasaad! Thank you for sharing your smile. Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/2/2023 5:32:00 AM

I see the wide smile and graceful sky through your eyes and descriptions. Well done my friend.

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/2/2023 1:00:00 AM

a beautiful rainbow can solace the soul, a moment "thriling" triolet, thanks yann

Valsa George

Date: 4/1/2023 11:19:00 PM

A great triolet, dear Lasaad. The sky smiles.... ! I always notice that you are an expert in Pantoum, Triolet, Rondeau, Blitz and similar other difficult verse.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/1/2023 4:43:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, You have penned such a lovely and positive triolet. I enjoyed it very much. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis Soupmail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2023 4:28:00 PM

Good triolet. These are not so easy to write but you have done a good job with this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara