Grace

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From Merriam-Webster:
Wallow: to roll oneself about in a lazy, relaxed, or ungainly manner; to devote oneself entirely; to become or remain helpless

GRACE the royal kingdom... while we wallowed in the blood ...changed our hellish course 7/10/2018

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Jenifer Jeyaseelan

Date: 7/12/2018 1:35:00 AM

That's a lovely thought about the grace of God! Enjoyed reading it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2018 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer! Blessings <3 Kim

Lyric Man

Date: 7/10/2018 10:22:00 PM

Kim.. significant message packed into this little Haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2018 7:57:00 AM

Thank you <3 Kim

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/10/2018 7:11:00 PM

"Because strait is the gate and narrow is the way which leadeth unto life and few there be that find it" Unfortunately, all have not nor will not change their course. Nice verse, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2018 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! <3 Kim

Tikar Osuru

Date: 7/10/2018 2:58:00 PM

Very nice haiku. Wallow is an excellent word to create your image.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Tikar!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/10/2018 2:51:00 PM

such a powerful image, well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!