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Gourdgeous

Gourdgeous, fairytale-scrumptious.
Not the pumpkin,
   you were hoping for.
      I liked the squid, unsquishy cephalopod,
the supermarket was selling.
   Pumpkins through the roof; stems
and leafy vines. Cinderella’s carriage 
      must have arrived in October.
        Princes and princesses ordering
theirs, or gleefully dancing through
   gourdgeous fields-a-plenty.
Whether a pumpkin or a country bump-kin,
      teeny or child-sized, whether white,
         orange, yellow or cat-black,
those lovely orbs or misshapen gourds
            are sweet and earthy; in fact, adored.
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Delegans Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:33 AM
This has a storied quality to it. Really had fun reading this one. Congrats on winning POTD, Kim!
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Dear Kim, Congrats on POTD! I keep rereading this and smiling like I’ve just found a secret passage in the produce aisle. The squid made me laugh out loud, so unexpected, so perfect. Even the oddest shapes are cherished. Somehow you made me feel tender toward gourds. That’s not nothing. It was a little burst of magic. Autumn Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:38 AM
So glad this made you smile and ponder those oft forgotten gourds! :) Thank you, Daniel!
Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 10:29 PM
Love the play on words in title, Kim. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! I hope you enjoyed your special day of recognition. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Bill!
M  Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Kim for your cute and clever poem! Fun….Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Deb! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Deb! :)
Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Dear Kim, I adore your ingenious, playful title and the delightful pumpkin poem that follows, where more frisky word-combos and vivid imageries romp through your verse. A splendid and unique autumn piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Glad you found it unique. I had fun writing it. Thank you, Susan!
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 12:41 AM
Many facets and fates of the humble pumpkin. great POTD!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Vandana!
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Hey-hey! Thanks for including me in the poem. That's right: I'm the 'country-bumpkin!' Congrats on POTD, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:22 AM
LOL! Thank you, Gershon!
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:27 PM
WOW!!! Congrats!!! You are the best and my heart means that!! You make me wanna eat, loool. <3
Anaya Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:20 PM
I too was celebrating the peacefulness of autumn & it's bountiful orbs. I love the blue pumpkins! Congratulations on the Poem Of The Day, Kim! Cheers!
Nicole Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:40 PM
Such a fun and festive little gem. : ) Now I'm in the mood for some pumpkin pie, with a happy fairy-tale ending. Your thoughts bring a smile, Kim. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy
DiMino Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 3:58 PM
Yes. They are in season now in Arizona. Have had several different types in just the past week. Delicious! Tasty POTD. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations, Dear Kim. A funny, whimsical poem of the season - subtle and cute!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Glad you liked :) Thank you!
Doll Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Hi Kim, great seasonal poem Congratulations om POTD~ Warren
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Thank you!
Grubb Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Kim…this is gourd-level genius and delightfully whimsical. Clever and cute. Love it, my friend. Congrats on POTD!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:23 PM
I appreciate you, Mickey, Thank you!
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 10:19 AM
And also, congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win................
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Gifford Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on winning POTD with your beautiful poem, Kim. Wishing you a wonderful weekend as you celebrate.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Have a nice weekend! Thank you, Zyrool!
Lawless Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:01 AM
Hey when did they have the PUMPKIN OF THE DAY contest. a little bit of wordplay, a trip through the Pumpkin patch no TRICKS here only a wonderful TREAT, nice one Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:20 PM
LOL…Pumpkin of the day! Thank you, John,
Kitchin Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Kim, a great poem and title. Congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, Tania!:)
Meadows Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Daisy! :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:16 AM
A sure sign Halloween is on the way. Congratulations to you Kim on todays POTD honour. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Tom! :)
Elliott Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations, Kim, on a autumnal tribute to pumpkins that is delightful. Happy POTD, and enjoy your special poetry day! Blessings :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Thank you, Gina! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 4:46 AM
returning to congratulate you, Kim, for your imaginative and unique poem being selected as POTD. Hooray!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Smiling! Thank you, Sara!
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Very nice read! Congratulations on your poem of the day win, have a wonderful day ~ hugs AA
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Abdullah! Glad you enjoyed!
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 2:24 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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