Jay Narain Poet Alliteration

Gotta love - reversible poem-POTD

Love’s journey, joy and tears,
Guided by grace through all the years.
Gotta love, in every guise,
Each chapter cherished, beneath the skies.

True love with God, tranquil and pure,
Promises eternal, pristine and sure.
Divine devotion, a destined delight,
Faithful forever, in the Father's light.

Memories murmur, melancholy in pairs.
Gone is the glow, a grievous gap glares,
Whispered words weep, wounds within deep.
Separation's sorrow, shadows silently sweep.

Tender touches, time transcends too soon.
She sings softly, serenades under the moon,
Laughter lingers long, lovely in twilight.
Living with love, life's luminous light.

Heartbeats hasten, hopes held high, hues of blue.
In anticipation, ardor awakens anew,
Gotta love the glowing gaze, a girl's gentle bloom.
Glimpses of grace in the gathering gloom.

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Silent One May 25, 2024 at 1:51 AM Very nice

Deb M May 23, 2024 at 12:23 PM Just lovely Jay! So pleased you got POTD….belated Congratulations! Debx

Kim Rodrigues May 22, 2024 at 8:31 PM Lovely! Congratulations on POTD!

David Crandall May 22, 2024 at 6:26 PM Congratulations Jay! Beautiful poem, and it's my introduction to the idea of "reversible poem" - fascinating!

Karen Jones May 22, 2024 at 5:57 PM So sensual and beautiful with magical alliteration! Well done! Congratulations on your potd honor!

Bill Baker May 22, 2024 at 5:32 PM Congratulations on your fine POTD, Jay! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill

Brandy Nicole May 22, 2024 at 2:14 PM ' True love with God, tranquil and pure, promises eternal; pristine and sure. ' Very comforting, indeed. Your words are beautiful, tender, romantic and spiritual, all at the same time. A challenge creating a reversible poem, as I have done so before. Overall, it's a fun experience. Well done, Jay. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Irene Hammer May 22, 2024 at 1:02 PM This is cool! Backwards and forwards and all around. Lovely alliteration.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 22, 2024 at 10:57 AM Hello Jay Narain, Congratulations on your POTD. A beautiful poem you created. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/ /D

Paula Goldsmith May 22, 2024 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............

I Am Anaya May 22, 2024 at 8:27 AM Congratulations on POTD Jay Narain! So many lines filled with alliteration that have impact, are fabulous! I especially loved "True love with God, tranquil and pure, Promises eternal, pristine and sure Divine devotion, a destined delight, Faithful forever, in the Father's light" Blessings. Enjoy your day :)

Linda Alice Fowler May 22, 2024 at 6:57 AM Solid rhymes and alliteration bring this gentle poem great dimension Jay. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 22, 2024 at 6:53 AM Hello Jay, your poem is a masterpiece of emotion and artistry, deserving of every accolade it receives. Your skillful crafting of words brings love's complexities to life, from its tender beginnings to its bittersweet farewells. Your work is a testament to the power of poetry to capture the essence of human experience. Congratulations on being recognized for your talent with POTD! - Blessings, Daniel

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 22, 2024 at 5:51 AM WOW! Kudos to you! I have rarely read such a flowing, emotional, spiritual, brilliant alliteration smoothly presented! Now you are inspiring me to try one! "Whispered words weep, wounds within deep" "Heartbeats hasten, hopes held high, hues of blue" - these, and so many complete lines of alliteration along with the depth of the theme, amazed me. Thank you, Jay, for creating such a masterpiece. It's a beauty! Adding to FAVES. Congratulations!

Christina Bowring May 22, 2024 at 4:51 AM Dear Jay, many congratulations for POTD with this truly beautiful, exquisite poem. It’s so well crafted and expressive, ‘ Each chapter cherished, beneath the skies’ ‘ Separation’s sorrow, shadows silently sweep’’ glimpses of grace in the gathering gloom’ Wonderful lines. Brilliant alliteration that flows so well. Really enjoyed it. Have a great celebratory day. Blessings to you :)

Vijay Pandit May 22, 2024 at 3:56 AM BIG congrats Jay, on POTD. Love reverberates throughout. Enjoy your special day.

Tania Kitchin May 22, 2024 at 3:22 AM Jay, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.

Nancy Kaufman May 22, 2024 at 2:47 AM Dear Jay, Congratulations on this well penned POTD. It whimsically dances so well with alliteration, a joy to read!

Hilda Greenhough May 22, 2024 at 2:41 AM Congratulations on POTD. a deserving poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2024 at 2:20 AM - A wonderful poem, Jay :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker May 22, 2024 at 1:48 AM What a sublime write, inspired by angels! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Jay

Regina Mcintosh May 22, 2024 at 1:23 AM Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina

Beryl Edmonds May 22, 2024 at 12:42 AM Wonderful poetry Jay, beautifully written, great alliteration. I love how it can be read top to bottom and bottom to top. Congratulations on a well deserved award for poem of the day… Beryl

Hilda Greenhough May 21, 2024 at 3:39 PM Thank you for this poem. It has so many aspects of love's emotions.