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Gordian Knot

The Gordian Knot of perpetuity
woven around your heart
is a thick thread of anguish
created by poison fingers from internal pain

Born in a mass of dark muck that drowned innocence
in screams unheard
now feeds on the blood-soaked veins of lovers
like a vampire in ruthless exultation
that revives strength and vigor
to cold calculating eyes of worthless passion
dripping from the hungry sweat for those chosen
to share silk sheets in longing nights of fragile dreams

To leave their hearts an empty husk
that tumbles away in winds of confusion
across a serpentine path of endless footprints
when their pain and torment become insufficient for pleasure

If I only knew what I know now

I would not have entered this chamber
of fragrant scents and sheer elegant veils
where my flesh was torn by fingertip talons 
leaving scars upon my naked back of tomorrows
where I emerged from this dung lit realm of fool's love
into a rush of shadows spinning away
from a vengeful mind filled with a reckoning
for an untold pain
covered now by the blank faces of passing lovers


8/25/19
contest If you only knew then

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/10/2020 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/8/2020 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:52:00 PM
Powerfully enough to make me feel that I can’t swallow!! Frederic you are so intense in your words! Lonna
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Date: 8/30/2019 6:09:00 PM
Back with my congratulations on your so very well deserved win.
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Date: 8/30/2019 9:01:00 AM
- A fantastic writing, Frederic - Congratulations on a top first place in the contest - Have a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:44:00 PM
That is a brilliant first line, did you know the term Gordian Knot is associated with Alexander the great? Sounds like pre knowledge would have prevented a lot of pain.. Loved your poem, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 8/27/2019 7:11:00 PM
wow, very sad one! You described so well the alluring chamber that rips people apart!
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Date: 8/26/2019 1:21:00 AM
ohh, lines shaded with longing and mellow tints...beautiful, frederic...huggs
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Date: 8/25/2019 7:00:00 PM
She sounds a bit like a succubus Frederic. A masterful creation Frederic! xxoo
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Date: 8/25/2019 6:41:00 PM
You pulled out all the stops on this one!!! Very good classic-like poetry in my very humble opinion.
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