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Gordian Knot

The Gordian Knot of perpetuity woven around your heart is a thick thread of anguish created by poison fingers from internal pain Born in a mass of dark muck that drowned innocence in screams unheard now feeds on the blood-soaked veins of lovers like a vampire in ruthless exultation that revives strength and vigor to cold calculating eyes of worthless passion dripping from the hungry sweat for those chosen to share silk sheets in longing nights of fragile dreams To leave their hearts an empty husk that tumbles away in winds of confusion across a serpentine path of endless footprints when their pain and torment become insufficient for pleasure If I only knew what I know now I would not have entered this chamber of fragrant scents and sheer elegant veils where my flesh was torn by fingertip talons leaving scars upon my naked back of tomorrows where I emerged from this dung lit realm of fool's love into a rush of shadows spinning away from a vengeful mind filled with a reckoning for an untold pain covered now by the blank faces of passing lovers 8/25/19 contest If you only knew then

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Date: 1/10/2020 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/8/2020 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:52:00 PM
Powerfully enough to make me feel that I can’t swallow!! Frederic you are so intense in your words! Lonna
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Date: 8/30/2019 6:09:00 PM
Back with my congratulations on your so very well deserved win.
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Date: 8/30/2019 9:01:00 AM
- A fantastic writing, Frederic - Congratulations on a top first place in the contest - Have a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:44:00 PM
That is a brilliant first line, did you know the term Gordian Knot is associated with Alexander the great? Sounds like pre knowledge would have prevented a lot of pain.. Loved your poem, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 8/27/2019 7:11:00 PM
wow, very sad one! You described so well the alluring chamber that rips people apart!
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Date: 8/26/2019 1:21:00 AM
ohh, lines shaded with longing and mellow tints...beautiful, frederic...huggs
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Date: 8/25/2019 7:00:00 PM
She sounds a bit like a succubus Frederic. A masterful creation Frederic! xxoo
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Date: 8/25/2019 6:41:00 PM
You pulled out all the stops on this one!!! Very good classic-like poetry in my very humble opinion.
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