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Goosebumps

In the early morning dawn a garden walker shivers, like a rose upon dew ground drops of silence enter neath' a watchful gaze as I wonder where the sun is I shudder in the none inside this secret garden, where I sit still as glass ; Diddle doddle goes the first bird of morning as he aims to please with colors rich and bright swiveling and singing chirping and gurgling I'm smoothed by the sound of his pure find beneath the blush of morning God's first rose appears to bloom ,inside my heart like sweet perfume. Contest Name: Goosebumps November 4, 2019

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Date: 11/7/2019 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful Pixie :-) x
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:14:00 AM
Ah, this is truly beautiful; gave me a goosebump or two.
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Date: 11/4/2019 9:30:00 AM
Nicely done Pixie. The last line makes it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/4/2019 7:21:00 AM
Gorgeously done. The last line brought it all "home".
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Date: 11/4/2019 7:13:00 AM
I like the last line a lot...Nice one Pixie
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:37:00 AM
From the pen of a talented artist..a superb write, Pixie..loved the ending lines.
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