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My Heart Is Dead

The night i changed is still so clear I swallowed those tablets with no fear It was to end, the crying cutting and blank stares To end the pain of living in despair To stop the questions that i do not know The question whether I want to go The answer is yes So leave me be The answer is yes So let me be free What’s the point I am useless What’s the point I am hideous What’s the point I am ever so numb What’s the point, i can’t feel no more My senses are vanished My heart is dead All my happiness has completely fled I’m gone already, just let me go It will be over before you know Hear I hold the knife of terror The one who will be sure I’m gone forever The one who seen me through such dark days The one who’s relieved all my pain Goodbye x

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/30/2017 8:42:00 AM

POWERFUL thank you for sharing kind regards

Douglas Brown

Date: 11/28/2017 12:38:00 PM

Wow! Take alook at my short story --The Los Angeles River - similar theme. Best,

Daisy Tyrrell
Date: 4/16/2018 5:54:00 AM

it was beautiful thx for sharing , i went through all your writing and it was amazing x

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/27/2017 3:05:00 PM

great write .....Seren

James Haley

Date: 11/22/2017 9:35:00 PM

Did you ever feel out of place Were you the only one in the room Not religion sex origin or race Had to do with this gloom You say something no one heard With eye’s staring through your face You dare not utter a single word Did you ever feel out of place As if they want you to fail As if they want you to loose Such a feeling of utter pail Is this the place that you choose If you leave this situation No one would even know you were there But since you have no real temptation You use valor instead of flare Did you ever feel out of place No place for man to be And they call this the human race Move on there’s more to see

Edward Mccall

Date: 11/19/2017 4:41:00 PM

Hi Daisy: you have such an incredible talent to convey your thoughts in to words. Please I hope you continue to bless us with your gift.

Daisy Tyrrell
Date: 4/16/2018 5:55:00 AM

thankyou so much xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/10/2017 8:18:00 PM

Poetry has been my outlet for the longest time. There's something comforting about writing words on a page. To those that write we often are so so hard on ourselves.Like the saying goes, we are our worst enemies. Be proud of your work. There are those who will listen. You have a voice, and I am happy to see that you're using it. Fight on, beautiful poet! Always, Laura

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 11/8/2017 8:56:00 AM

Oh Daisy : ( Hugs for you. X

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2017 8:52:00 AM

A very sad write, I hope you are ok and this is an old poem or something that does not apply to you anymore..

Kelli White
Date: 11/26/2017 12:27:00 PM

Silent one message me please