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Goodbye To Summer

"summer" is almost gone her cascade of lilac and roses entwined on white fences diminish, give way to "autumn's blush" i see the "distorted sunrise" peek at me from the branches the fresh yellow-orange "almost autumn" leaves slightly dance,beneath "autumn's breath" i see her beauty, yet i know in my "seasoned mind" that "reflections lie" the "color of october" will fall blank within "November's wind" leaving me "longing" for "shades of blue" in summer's skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 9:53:00 PM
I really liked this one too...congratulations
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:03:00 PM
A very fine creative collection that speak beautifully...congrats on the win :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:49:00 PM
wow, Sandra. I have seen some good ones, but I think this is MY personal favorite now seeing this one for the first time. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/5/2013 3:29:00 PM
a nice winning poem Sandra.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:59:00 PM
So good to see you on the winners list. Congratulations on an excellent entry. Hugs Rick
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Date: 9/5/2013 10:20:00 AM
Magnificent!!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win..... Jake
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:37:00 AM
beautiful write Sandra....congrats on your win
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:29:00 AM
This flows like it was meant to be.........not at all, no hint of consisting of titles. Lovely poem, Sandra....congratulations!
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:27:00 AM
Sandra, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/24/2013 2:27:00 PM
Ahhh...perfect!!!!!!! :-)
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