Goodbye Fault

Inspired by a Cyrus William Mistake
Some sticks and stones have more bones than any philosophy you have ever shown. When you assume your arrogant position respect disappears from my spousal vision. I find myself constantly wishing we were not on a marriage mission. Nothing wrong is ever caused by you. You view fault as blame needing pointed to. Mistakes are what others cause or do, that your perfect self suffers through. You need not learn, change or absorb and that is why I color you absurd. So, for you, I finally draw this line – one side is yours, the other, mine. Freely take all the fault you can find and lay it on me in your best whine. I know you will not reflect or opine. As for me, I’m leaving my fault behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 8:02 PM
awesome write, CayCay, awesome :)
Breedt Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Hi Cay Cay, they have no faults these people and so theres never any need to say sorry. Arrogance and criticism is what they do. I missed talking to you. PS has changed my format or something as I cannot reply to comments and it grates me inside. However , I see that YOU can and so maybe I did something wrong.
Kasperyan Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Oh yikes, don't we all know this one sometimes. You nailed the feeling!
Richards Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Wow.....that last stanza resounds with someone who has risen above the fault-line !! Good for you !!
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Hi CayCay, I hope that no 3 was the last mistake, and that no4 makes up for all the precious ones! You did well to draw the line! I pity the next unsuspecting female who got lumbered with his arrogance. ~ Regards // paul
Godwin Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Hey, thank you. Number four is my soulmate and I'd walk thru hell if need be for that. I give thanks for the growth I obviously needed for my journey and received in quantity from 'mistakes.' I bear scars, but no regrets. Again, thanks and all the best ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:48 AM
wow, Caycay, this is taking a very original view on that theme. I Love how you did this. Yeah, too bad hubbies just don't get it!! Some day the earthquake is gonna explode!!! GREAT JOB
Vaso Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:53 PM
LOL You sure told him!!! I loved the last line! A very well written poem!
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:59 PM
I'm glad you laughed instead of 'worrying' for my emotions long healed now. From him, I learned many human traits I didn't know existed, such as never thinking or feeling deeply enough to evolve. Thank you, Arthur ... CayCay
Bauer Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:44 PM
i hope he got the message! very well said!
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Of course he didn't, that would have required DEEP thinking and growth. BUT, I truly haven't cared for many a year. Bless his heart (he has one, I heard it beat.) Good to see you, sorry I don't visit your wit near enough. So much to do on Soup, so much missed. Thank you, Ilene, and all the best ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:10 PM
You're well rid CayCay I agree with the other comments very well expressed:-) hugs jan xx
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Been well rid for 12 years now so my emotions weren't involved, in fact they were resolved years before my fear of the 'unknown' allowed my flight. He was as deep as a puddle. Thank you, Jan ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Best leaving it behind. Wonderfully expressed.
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Best leaving I ever had! Thank you, Tim
Stebbings Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Oh, so very eloquent CayCay. Beautifully expressed. Barry.
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Thank you for such kind words, Barry. All the best ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 3:25 PM
remarkably expressed; finding fault is an individual's own perception, cay... huggs!
Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 7:05 PM
He was an ass (may I say ass?) who never bothered to figure out what his perceptions were, at least not of anything external. Maybe in the past decade plus he has changed, I don't inquire and I moved many states away. Thank you for commenting. All the best, all the days ... CayCay
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