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Goodbye Fault

Some sticks and stones have more bones than any philosophy you have ever shown. When you assume your arrogant position respect disappears from my spousal vision. I find myself constantly wishing we were not on a marriage mission. Nothing wrong is ever caused by you. You view fault as blame needing pointed to. Mistakes are what others cause or do, that your perfect self suffers through. You need not learn, change or absorb and that is why I color you absurd. So for you, I finally draw this line – one side is yours, the other, mine. Freely take all the fault you can find and lay it on me in your best whine. I know you will not reflect or opine. And me, I’m leaving my fault behind. ... CayCay Jennings November 26, 2016

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Date: 11/24/2017 8:02:00 PM
awesome write, CayCay, awesome :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:53:00 PM
Hi Cay Cay, they have no faults these people and so theres never any need to say sorry. Arrogance and criticism is what they do. I missed talking to you. PS has changed my format or something as I cannot reply to comments and it grates me inside. However , I see that YOU can and so maybe I did something wrong.
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Date: 11/30/2016 2:04:00 AM
Oh yikes, don't we all know this one sometimes. You nailed the feeling!
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Date: 11/29/2016 7:50:00 PM
Wow.....that last stanza resounds with someone who has risen above the fault-line !! Good for you !!
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Date: 11/27/2016 12:00:00 PM
Hi CayCay, I hope that no 3 was the last mistake, and that no4 makes up for all the precious ones! You did well to draw the line! I pity the next unsuspecting female who got lumbered with his arrogance. ~ Regards // paul
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/27/2016 12:32:00 PM
Hey, thank you. Number four is my soulmate and I'd walk thru hell if need be for that. I give thanks for the growth I obviously needed for my journey and received in quantity from 'mistakes.' I bear scars, but no regrets. Again, thanks and all the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/27/2016 10:48:00 AM
wow, Caycay, this is taking a very original view on that theme. I Love how you did this. Yeah, too bad hubbies just don't get it!! Some day the earthquake is gonna explode!!! GREAT JOB
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Date: 11/26/2016 6:53:00 PM
LOL You sure told him!!! I loved the last line! A very well written poem!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/26/2016 6:59:00 PM
I'm glad you laughed instead of 'worrying' for my emotions long healed now. From him, I learned many human traits I didn't know existed, such as never thinking or feeling deeply enough to evolve. Thank you, Arthur ... CayCay
Date: 11/26/2016 6:44:00 PM
i hope he got the message! very well said!
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:01:00 PM
Of course he didn't, that would have required DEEP thinking and growth. BUT, I truly haven't cared for many a year. Bless his heart (he has one, I heard it beat.) Good to see you, sorry I don't visit your wit near enough. So much to do on Soup, so much missed. Thank you, Ilene, and all the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/26/2016 6:10:00 PM
You're well rid CayCay I agree with the other comments very well expressed:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2016 6:57:00 PM
Been well rid for 12 years now so my emotions weren't involved, in fact they were resolved years before my fear of the 'unknown' allowed my flight. He was as deep as a puddle. Thank you, Jan ... CayCay
Date: 11/26/2016 5:12:00 PM
Best leaving it behind. Wonderfully expressed.
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:02:00 PM
Best leaving I ever had! Thank you, Tim
Date: 11/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
Oh, so very eloquent CayCay. Beautifully expressed. Barry.
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you for such kind words, Barry. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/26/2016 3:25:00 PM
remarkably expressed; finding fault is an individual's own perception, cay... huggs!
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:05:00 PM
He was an ass (may I say ass?) who never bothered to figure out what his perceptions were, at least not of anything external. Maybe in the past decade plus he has changed, I don't inquire and I moved many states away. Thank you for commenting. All the best, all the days ... CayCay

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