Goodbye

Goodbye my love It breaks my heart to see you go Goodbye my love. I pray God’s blessings from above. Please hurry back before the snow And leave before my tears shall flow Goodbye my love A Rondelet for Brian's contest Won a 2nd place it is a Rondelet

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/29/2011 6:01:00 PM

I wish we could say HELLO love...at least a few more times? BIG HUGS! Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:26:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:37:00 PM

hey,this form seems a bit like triolet. I quite like this form, Joyce, WELL done. and congratulations.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2011 11:52:00 AM

I'm going to have to find a way to lift your spirits, dear Joyce. Such a sad and moving poem. Everyone at my "table of four" did well in this contest. We golden gals rock together. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 8:10:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on your second place win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty my friend..luv.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 7:39:00 AM

great form and substance, joyce... a heap of cheers for hitting the charts! :) huggs, nette

Cory Long

Date: 6/4/2011 7:34:00 AM

this is very nice..the flow is awesome soup mail! cory