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Goodbye

The last time we met I told you goodbye. Perhaps I should have instead said, “Farewell.” I never intended to make you cry. Just thought I could be alone for a spell. Mayhap sayonara, auf wiedersehen, Adios, or au revoir might suffice. I understand what I uttered was plain And so, I failed my attempt to be nice. Don’t say you would be content with, “So long!” Not after we’ve dared to share what we’ve shared. To say, “Go with God.” Well, that just seems wrong When what we have broken might be repaired. Don’t take “Goodbye” as “Good riddance, amen!” Look at it as “Until we meet again…” 2/23/2023 Written for Writing Challenge G Words Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:54:00 PM
Stephen, a great sonnet both with a touch of sadness and humor. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 3/2/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity.
Date: 2/25/2023 11:09:00 AM
- I like “Until we meet again” ... not goodbye - Beautiful poem, Stephen -Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/26/2023 7:28:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 2/24/2023 7:35:00 PM
A great sonnet on goodbye. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/26/2023 7:29:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:15:00 PM
Ha! I chose a plethora of ways to say goodbye as well, although you poem has much more substance and meaning then mine. Congratulations on your win Stephen! :)
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/26/2023 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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