Goodbye

The last time we met I told you goodbye.
Perhaps I should have instead said, “Farewell.”
I never intended to make you cry.
Just thought I could be alone for a spell.

Mayhap sayonara, auf wiedersehen,
Adios, or au revoir might suffice.
I understand what I uttered was plain
And so, I failed my attempt to be nice.

Don’t say you would be content with, “So long!”
Not after we’ve dared to share what we’ve shared.
To say, “Go with God.” Well, that just seems wrong
When what we have broken might be repaired.

Don’t take “Goodbye” as “Good riddance, amen!”
Look at it as “Until we meet again…”


2/23/2023
Written for Writing Challenge G Words
Sponsored by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 11:54 PM
Stephen, a great sonnet both with a touch of sadness and humor. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Tefft Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Thank you for the opportunity.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 11:09 AM
- I like “Until we meet again” ... not goodbye - Beautiful poem, Stephen -Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Tefft Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thanks so much.
Alex Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 7:35 PM
A great sonnet on goodbye. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Tefft Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:29 PM
I'm glad you liked it.
Fowler Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:15 PM
Ha! I chose a plethora of ways to say goodbye as well, although you poem has much more substance and meaning then mine. Congratulations on your win Stephen! :)
Tefft Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Thank you very much.
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