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Good Wishes for my Enemy

dandelion clock wishes wind-borne a cloud of disparate dreams seeking capture and release collections of sentimental secrets whispering weightless wounds listen as they speak of no warring words, no wasted hours fighting, no worlds collapsing in on themselves in this life I'll have no enemies let you & I rest in peace

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Date: 1/4/2024 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely enemy write. I say, bless them/let them go... Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 1/4/2024 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Paula x
Date: 12/23/2023 4:24:00 PM
you imagery was most powerful and effective...I liked 'no worlds collapsing' I also liked dandelion clock wishes wind-borne...it caught me attention. Lovely words...have a great holiday ahead, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/24/2023 1:22:00 AM
Thank you Sara, you are a wonderful encourager of so many poets here. Have a lovely Christmas x
Date: 12/23/2023 11:59:00 AM
Encouraging sentiment
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Date: 12/24/2023 1:21:00 AM
I have zero energy for grudges - the most I can manage is being wary.

Book: Shattered Sighs