Good Vibrations

Morning dew lets
drip essential
waters, the active
ripples drop,
landing, working
with the melting
ponds, to release
surface tension 
The callings of
chirping birds,
resonating
pleasantries to ears
everywhere, fervent
life, the eager
promise of things to
come 
The good morning sun
evaporates people's
resentment, feelings
over three months of
abandonment, making
it up with a return 

Ceremonious 
Rich with golden
beams 
A father figure  

Hatch lings making
their identity
known, breaking from
shells to survive,
congregating around
mother for advice, 
Feeling the
strengths of
togetherness, still
insecure, even under
the gentlest of
April breezes, that
whisper comforting
thoughts
The Lush trees,
restore their former
selves, showing
boldness and beauty
and shade and
shelter, trying to
outdo each other  
   
Nature and Nurture
Kissed by the broken
winds 
Fragility fades

 Strong showers
precipitate as the
tears of the sun,
bringing out regrets
for having left us
at all, so fondly
appreciated
       Our offspring
play in the muddy
puddles, birds
flutter about to
bathe, flowers grow
bolder, while bees
work the sap 
Libidos driven by a
fervor, wanting to
be part of it all,
form partnerships
and blessed unions
worldwide, we will
conceive   

Our prosperity
Interlinking all of
us
Timeless equation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 8:15 AM
nice win ;}
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 4:01 PM
((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 4:16 PM
ahhh, the time of rebirth and creation. Beautifully expressed. Congrats in the contest.
Squyres Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Just love this...so poetic in structure !! Your haiku is just wonderful !! Congrats on your win !!
A   Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Karl, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Thanks for the entry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Wow we picked the same title LOL, I'll change mine. work on the haiku the prose is fine google graceguts haiku checklist, it will help alot! Light & Love
Marszalowicz Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 7:14 AM
If you could sometime check out the new poem after I looked at the website. I hope I interpreted it right. Thanks for the advice, I didn't like criticism in younger years but now I am much more open. Smiles!
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