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Good Vibrations

Morning dew lets drip essential waters, the active ripples drop, landing, working with the melting ponds, to release surface tension The callings of chirping birds, resonating pleasantries to ears everywhere, fervent life, the eager promise of things to come The good morning sun evaporates people's resentment, feelings over three months of abandonment, making it up with a return Ceremonious Rich with golden beams A father figure Hatch lings making their identity known, breaking from shells to survive, congregating around mother for advice, Feeling the strengths of togetherness, still insecure, even under the gentlest of April breezes, that whisper comforting thoughts The Lush trees, restore their former selves, showing boldness and beauty and shade and shelter, trying to outdo each other Nature and Nurture Kissed by the broken winds Fragility fades Strong showers precipitate as the tears of the sun, bringing out regrets for having left us at all, so fondly appreciated Our offspring play in the muddy puddles, birds flutter about to bathe, flowers grow bolder, while bees work the sap Libidos driven by a fervor, wanting to be part of it all, form partnerships and blessed unions worldwide, we will conceive Our prosperity Interlinking all of us Timeless equation

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Date: 7/30/2013 8:15:00 AM
nice win ;}
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:01:00 PM
((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 3/6/2013 4:16:00 PM
ahhh, the time of rebirth and creation. Beautifully expressed. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/6/2013 1:38:00 PM
Just love this...so poetic in structure !! Your haiku is just wonderful !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 3/5/2013 9:42:00 PM
Karl, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thanks for the entry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/19/2013 10:47:00 AM
Wow we picked the same title LOL, I'll change mine. work on the haiku the prose is fine google graceguts haiku checklist, it will help alot! Light & Love
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karl marszalowicz
Date: 2/20/2013 7:14:00 AM
If you could sometime check out the new poem after I looked at the website. I hope I interpreted it right. Thanks for the advice, I didn't like criticism in younger years but now I am much more open. Smiles!