Good Vibrations

Good Vibrations 

It’s been one year,
three months 
and two days,
since Floyd last rode his Harley.

Damn stroke!
His F-ing left leg don’t work 
and he barely grips with his left hand.

Sheila watches him every day,
yep every F-ing day
as he limps out to his bike.
For hours he  stares at it.
She sees the right corner of his mouth lift, he can only half smile now. She’s pretty sure it’s a smile.

He’s got one of those grippy things,
he’s always trying to squeeze it.
She can see that determination in his eyes.
With his slurred speech 
He says “I’m gonna ride again”
Sheila thinks just maybe he will.

He’s had that Harley longer than her. 
Truth be told it was part of his appeal.
Floyd was the bad boy
and her, the Pastor’s daughter.
She remembers his mischievous smile.
Floyd was self assured but not cocky.
He asked her “Do you want to go for a ride?”
She said “no I couldn’t.”
He laughed and said “I won’t bite, unless ya want me to.”
Something about Floyd she couldn’t resist 
She said “Alright, but don’t go too fast.”

She was scared and excited 
as she hopped on the back of his bike.
Floyd told her to wrap her arms around his waist.
She still remembers the smell of his leather jacket.
Sheila liked the feel of the bike between her legs.
Back then she wore a mini skirt,
so there wasn’t much between her and the saddle.
Harley’s have that delicious vibration.
Yep, Floyd’s bike gave her an ****** before he did.

About ten months later
her and Floyd got married.
That was nearly forty years ago.
Now many wouldn’t believe it
but Sheila and Floyd didn’t consummate 
their relationship until the wedding night.
She had her beliefs and Floyd respected them.
It was worth the wait,
riding Floyd was better than riding that Harley.

That was then and this is now.
Life has a way of taking but it gives too.
Like Floyd, Sheila is determined.
That spark is what attracted Floyd to her.
It’s also kept him interested.
She’s strong in the best of ways.
Her faith has got them past a lot of .

Unbeknownst to Floyd, Sheila’s been taking riding lessons.
It’s taken nearly  eight months but she’s got her licence.
He kept asking her where she’s been going.
All she ever said is “It’s a surprise, you're going to have to wait.” He’d think “There’s not much else I can do”

Sheila walks by Floyd and straddles the Harley.
She starts it up and looks into Floyd’s eyes.
“Do you want to go for a ride?”
Floyd says “Hell Ya!”
He sits on the back of the Harley with his arms around her waist. He feels scared and excited. Mostly he’s happy as hell.

In about ten months from now, Floyd will be riding.
Sheila will be happy to be on the back again.
Yep, enjoying those good vibrations.

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Date: 1/27/2024 10:32:00 AM
Dear Richard, such inspiring poetry! So intimate, so personal, a story of endless love, strong and vibrant. "Yep, enjoying those good vibrations." Loved that last line for an awesome finale to a captivating and uplifting piece filled with life's textures and meaningful contrasts. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2024 10:42:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
Date: 1/26/2024 12:12:00 PM
Great storytelling, Richard..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:37:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 1/26/2024 11:06:00 AM
A wonderful very real poem of unconditional love and determination with a touch of naughtiness !! Haha…..Enjoyed this Richard! Debx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:38:00 PM
I’m pleased you enjoyed it Deb. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.
Date: 1/26/2024 9:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write/story. You could turn this into a book... Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Paula.
Date: 1/26/2024 8:17:00 AM
Raw but real, Rich. Sheila's a real woman.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:38:00 PM
Indeed she is. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 1/26/2024 8:07:00 AM
In sickness and in health she stood by him every step of the way. Recovering from a stroke takes a hell of a long time for sure. Great writing Richard an enjoyable read that gives you hope when everything goes against you. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:40:00 PM
Sometimes life is tough. It’s easier with the love of a good woman. Thanks for your kind comment.
Date: 1/26/2024 7:29:00 AM
A wonderful poem about resilience and determination in the face of adversity, Richard. Floyd's struggle to recover from a stroke, and his love for his Harley, as well as Sheila's unwavering support and determination help him regain his passion for riding. The word choice in the poem is raw and colloquial, reflecting emotions and experiences of characters. The use of expletives adds to the authenticity of the tale and emphasizes the frustration and determination felt by the characters.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 1:41:00 PM
Great response Sotto. Thanks for weighing in.
Date: 1/26/2024 6:47:00 AM
Hey Richard, and I'm speechless! It's such a powerful and moving story about love, resilience, and the good things in life. I love how you move in the past and present and how Sheila's strength and determination shine through. The ending is perfect, full of hope and promise. Excellent poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/26/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. :0)
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