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Good Tidings

Many are the rivers rushing toward the tide gouging out the soft spots washing away the sighs watch the flotsam twirl to vortex watch the froth ring wide Many are the river's rushings toward the tide Deep within the current flows coming from on high stirring up man's passions stripping the woodlands pride purging banks of fool's gold's glitter in eddies 'long side It seems for branches waterlogged a nascent dream that which was rock solid moves, briskly downstream not dead, alive and journeying all few wish to abide Many are the river's rushings toward the tide Goodbye to mountain, hill and rise, forest green and bright snapped the bowed, and floated down between the cliffs to ride kissing as they touch each drifter seeking the world wide Many are the rivers rushing toward the tide gouging out the soft spots washing away the sighs watch the flotsam twirl to vortex teem toward the tide Poet: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Debbie. Love Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:15:00 AM
This is very beautiful poem my dear friend, Debbie! I love it and I can see vividly the image of good tidings and feel like singing while reading it! Congratulations in your awesome win! love always, Leonora
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Date: 12/5/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win once more Debbie love xx
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:45:00 PM
Very beautiful, love the view of the river and your lovely poetry
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Date: 12/3/2012 7:15:00 PM
congrats on your win Debbie
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:08:00 PM
Another good win Debbie... love it...pd
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Date: 12/3/2012 4:26:00 PM
Congrats :-) Sandy
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Date: 11/24/2012 8:40:00 AM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, This is Superb. Maybe some of the Water- Logged branches came off the mountain I use to live on Soup Mail Call LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/23/2012 2:30:00 PM
This is so musical and it waves and rides the eddy's so nicely. Wonderful.
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Date: 11/23/2012 2:26:00 PM
Ah the never ending journey, this is lovely Debbie. natures carousel, water to the ocean, which forms the clouds of rain, etc.. i read this like many haikus together....
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Book: Shattered Sighs