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Good Riddance

Serenity appears for all to behold 
mountainous lake unfelt by cold
your body sinks in waters deep
time and misery to now unfold

      

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Sponsor: John Freeman
Contest: Rubaiyat Form

Copyright © Judy Konos | Year Posted 2011

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Meera Jyothilekshmi Date: 4/29/2011 7:49:00 AM Dear judy, succinct and enigmatic piece of wonderful poetry!congratulations on this 6th place win. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2011 4:22:00 PM Interesting description of the scene..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/27/2011 10:40:00 AM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Judy Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/27/2011 8:38:00 AM Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Judy. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/26/2011 4:08:00 PM How creative, Judy. Perhaps the cold waters will wash away the misery. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/26/2011 12:37:00 PM Congratulations Judy on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/26/2011 12:34:00 PM Congrats Judy on your fabulous win in John's contest with this perfect piece using the new form so well luv.. enjoy your placement with luv.. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/26/2011 12:17:00 PM Many congratulations on your sixth place win Judy (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 4/26/2011 11:24:00 AM Congratulations on 6th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/26/2011 11:17:00 AM . Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Judy, Lainie Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/17/2011 8:37:00 PM enjoyed reading this one Judy, a great piece of fine poetry. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2011 7:02:00 PM Luv this one Judy .. great insight and good luck in John's contest luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/14/2011 12:53:00 PM Lovely observation of the scenic beauty and its feelings, Judy Login to Reply