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Serenity appears for all to behold mountainous lake unfelt by cold your body sinks in waters deep time and misery to now unfold *** Sponsor: John Freeman Contest: Rubaiyat Form

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Date: 4/29/2011 7:49:00 AM
Dear judy, succinct and enigmatic piece of wonderful poetry!congratulations on this 6th place win.
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:22:00 PM
Interesting description of the scene..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Judy
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:38:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Judy. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:08:00 PM
How creative, Judy. Perhaps the cold waters will wash away the misery. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations Judy on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congrats Judy on your fabulous win in John's contest with this perfect piece using the new form so well luv.. enjoy your placement with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:17:00 PM
Many congratulations on your sixth place win Judy (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on 6th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:17:00 AM
. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Judy, Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2011 8:37:00 PM
enjoyed reading this one Judy, a great piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:02:00 PM
Luv this one Judy .. great insight and good luck in John's contest luv..
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Date: 4/14/2011 12:53:00 PM
Lovely observation of the scenic beauty and its feelings, Judy
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