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Good Night

GOOD NIGHT Spread out in the bramble, downtown parade a dusky memory. Arrived at the head of the line. no flashlight, candle in his hand, Dylan’s voice on his lap, his girl listens, smiles at the camera. he reads, “Do not go gentle into that good night.” her light dress, a tie a vest resemble the times, serious — no one went out, blue jeans not for dates, fireworks will wait until the last five words, “the dying of the light.” meanwhile families arrive, after supper — morsels to the ear. nuptials in a year. 2/29/2020 BACK WHEN Poetry Contest Line Gauthier: Contest Sponsor Poem: Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas first published in 1951

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Date: 3/1/2020 12:43:00 PM
Hi Kin, this is a delicately formed poem of nostalgia and reflection. Dylan Thomas being a big influence on my early life I very much appreciated the references.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2020 12:47:00 PM
You’re most welcome! Thank you!
Date: 2/29/2020 11:43:00 PM
this is a wonderful write Kim... you really gave the picture a story line...I am sure this will do well in the contest... hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 2/29/2020 11:00:00 PM
Kim, This poem has such a special feel.,that calls to a better time, a better place. Absolutely captivated by your ending..,'morsels to the ear. ... nuptials in a year.' -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/29/2020 11:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard! <3 Kim

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