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Charlie Brown would utter, “Good grief.” It’s good only in the sense of camaraderie, a shared bond of suffering and hope, if one stands with a strong faith; but the utter agony of love “two became one,” the plea in a father’s eyes wanting more time, desperate for an answer that is not logical to his mind. So he wakes up “once again,” breathes in and out, hugs my mother’s urn, feeling he’s failed at the promise to keep her safe. Thankful for family all about. 61 years of marriage - clinging to circular patterns. Some released as ashes. 4/23/2021 Line Gauthier’s Grief

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Date: 4/30/2021 10:23:00 AM
Perfectly titled, Kim. Heart wrenching heartache. Love the last lines. Congratulations on your win. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 4/28/2021 10:01:00 PM
" feeling he’s failed at the promise to keep her safe." This is what men do to themselves, thinking they could have prevented what they can never prevent, sadly. Well said.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2021 4:31:00 AM
This thing called grief is not easy. <3
Date: 4/23/2021 9:55:00 AM
My heart goes out to you, your father and all the family. God will grant relief eventually.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2021 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! You are a good friend. Blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs