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Gonna Get Along Without You Now- Ct

You left without saying goodbye Tears on my pillow Family conflict ... Lust He plays away from home Behind closed doors A lousy hotel He wanted to get his leg over Caught with his pants down Trying something new Teds no longer got brewers droop! She likes it hot and spicy Dressed in tight leather Kay is so hot She keeps forgetting to take the pill Oops it’s a bit of a cock up Baby talk ... Gymslip mum An unexpected delivery Homeward bound The wanderer returns So sorry Forgive and forget - A trail of destruction On yer bike! Let me tell you exactly what I’m thinkin Forget feeling fruity ... Screw you Its over! The point of no return Forgiveness feels like a rotted grave I don’t need you anymore I never ever want to see you again Goodbye forever 100% genuine titles of some of my poems! Collaboration Of Your Titles Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 5/7/19

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2019 4:40:00 AM

This is simply amazing Jan! I bet it took you a while? Mine took me all day. Your titles read like a true poem and there is great emotion and passion in your lines, though they are titles. Congratulations on your deserving first placement. I loved this contest. xxoo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2019 8:23:00 AM

Not surprised, this ismost deserving Jan. Congrats on your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2019 12:24:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/14/2019 11:37:00 PM

the titles together like this make me want to go read more of your poems! Congrats on your win.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/14/2019 9:37:00 PM

Well done Jan, congrats on your win!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/14/2019 9:03:00 PM

Jan, you did a fabulous and amazing job collaborating your titles into this humorous stylish poem. I loved it! Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs // Charlie xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/11/2019 9:44:00 AM

Ha ha, your humour shines brilliantly.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Rick, from the moment I joined soup I wanted to make folk smile and forget their troubles for a while and seeing my silly titles making a credible poem certainly has made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/10/2019 7:43:00 PM

I LOL'ed a few times reading this ;)))), a freak'n hoot! Love it. xomo!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:57:00 AM

I am so glad you liked it Mo it was such fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/7/2019 11:41:00 AM

Reads like a winner, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:56:00 AM

thanks Ralph:-) hugs Jan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/7/2019 1:22:00 AM

This is an excellent poem of your blending of all your poem titles , a very clever, sophisticated write, and I am certain a win! Hugs and blessings,, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:56:00 AM

thanks Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Foster

Date: 7/6/2019 1:49:00 PM

forgiveness feels like a rotted grave... I get that. Excellent write. Don't let them win. No free rent in your head. You are the best, they are less than... Keep your head high, you are the winner as they can no longer hurt you. Ann

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:56:00 AM

Just a fictional poem using my poetry titles - makes me smile when i see how they turned into a credible storyline:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/6/2019 8:53:00 AM

A great idea... and the delivery here was revealing...Nice one...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2019 11:55:00 AM

thanks Arturo:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/6/2019 6:53:00 AM

Wow! Jan, You did a good job blending your titles. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2019 7:16:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2019 5:39:00 AM

This is truly stupendous! "Kay is so hot She keeps forgetting to take the pill Oops it’s a bit of a cock up Baby talk ..." Wow! Loved it. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2019 6:26:00 AM

It was fun to write Caren lol:-) hugs Jan xx