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you gathered my mind - back streets, alleys ...

        again ... one thought only, piqued by a sound, exquisite.
            times so vibrant and delirious that all was a fever ... so
    much forbidden food I engorged behind a mask, then spit
gently, the seeds, to find purchase where they may. So
        wrong and bright ... so dark and right ... mind and body

            thrown on the potter's wheel of a beast, manipulated so
    by innate intent, that I spun no mortal mercy of my own.
A magnetic draw far beyond my sinew and vitality. To thus
    worship all that is not, to fawn at fear's reprieves, and fall
            by the altar, sordid and blood-ripe. To rend the sour Eden

    leaves, and taste their bitter glory, to watch the last full
breath of a saint stand briefly in the winter air, and move
        my cheek against it ... to hear the first gasp drawn by a
            monster in innocence and nascency, and press my palm
    to quell. Why? Why not?? Such was brought forth amidst

pain to scrape the spillings of a febrile feast, sorrow ever
        waiting, watching, holding my hand in the dark. Nails dug
            into flesh at the prayer that Mercy might come to shine
    in the night ... but the WAIT, oh, that accursed wait can
devour you whole. Let the minutes go, or the hours will

        let go YOU, and the days will be ghosts ... years but the
            whispers of a phantom. Loose the wrongs and reasons -
    like all the darkened deeds of a backward glance, they are
DONE ... if not, mark the dour glint in their eye, and heed
        well the crack of your bones, as they consume all you are ...

            and COULD be.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "In The Back Streets Of My Mind" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 5th Place ~  in the "Religion Or Philosophy Poetry Contest", Kai Michael Neumann, Sponsor.

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Date: 9/30/2019 11:47:00 AM
Wow Greg, your words had me deciphering your poem as I would a painting with much detail! Many emotions arise leading me to my own back streets. This is marvelous! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 5:25:00 PM
One day, I'd like to think, I will write like this. Your poem has blown me away... so well written.
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Date: 9/27/2019 3:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great and deep winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:57:00 PM
Intriguing for certain... All my greatest congrats on your win. It is a wonder of a poem... words so poetic - WOW.... God bless you
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:06:00 PM
Sometimes I wonder why you are not sending all your poems out to those really literary journals that exist. You are so above par, Greg! You will always be number one here!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/26/2019 9:37:00 PM
Oh, you are so sweet, Andrea, and you know your opinion means a great deal to me ... I'm going to try submitting some soon, so we'll see. Thanks for the kind and encouragine words, Buddy! :o) <3
Date: 9/26/2019 3:23:00 PM
You top honors again, so deservingly so ~ Aloha always William
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/26/2019 9:36:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, William, I so appreciate the wonderful comments - blessings to you, my friend! :o)
Date: 9/26/2019 3:17:00 PM
This is a masterpiece Greg, oh my I missed this one yesterday, it may be your best write...I would say in the last six months...maybe a year...not sure but it was an obvious winner, and as I said about your other masterpiece, this will win any contest you put it up against. Mark my words, this one will go down in history!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/26/2019 9:35:00 PM
That's very kind of you to say, John, and I thank you so much - your opinion is always very important to me, and I'm glad you liked this one. Blessings, Bro! :o)
Date: 9/26/2019 3:12:00 PM
You mind seems a bit dark here and haunted by a ghost you cant seem to forget... one of your best... Congratulations on you first place in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/26/2019 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much, S1, this means a lot to me ... there is a lot of heartache and history in this one, and it's important to me for many reasons. I am so pleased that you found it worthy of recognition. Blessings and best wishes, my friend! :o)
Date: 7/31/2017 3:16:00 AM
This is epic. Congratulations. I can read this over and over again and find new nuances every time. And (not but), even if one ignores the complex meaning (which I do not, because I am 'big' on meaning) the words alone just blend it a composition on their own. Many wishes, Kai
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Kai - I know you are someone who appreciates ambiguity and layered meaning as I do, and this one is one of my personal favorites for that reason ... there are multiple things going on, but mostly about dealing with guilt and self-forgiveness. This is one of my best, I believe. Thanks again, My Friend!
Date: 7/30/2017 3:19:00 PM
It is wonderful to be able to write well expressed free verse. Great job. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 11:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Janis, that's very sweet of you! Blessings, Friend! :-)
Date: 7/7/2017 9:47:00 AM
You certainly have a splendid way with words,( OH ) that I could write so well.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/8/2017 10:09:00 PM
I think you DO write that well, my friend ... but thank you VERY kindly for such a nice comment. Blessings, Brother!
Date: 7/5/2017 2:10:00 AM
What Budgie (White Wolf) said :) Man, you sure can write, breathtaking.... "Forbidden food I engorged // Behind a mask, then spit // Gently, the seeds" THAT. Food for thought my dear friend.....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/5/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, my friend ... greatly appreciated. This is one of my best, I think ... and a personal fav, for many reasons.
Date: 7/4/2017 7:58:00 AM
Man, you sure can write! Breathtaking! You're an author? Yes?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/4/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thank you kindly, my friend ... I am not an author, but I hope to be someday! (I've only been writing poetry for about two years, "seriously" for about a year). So glad you like this ... this was a cathartic work for me, and very precious.
Date: 7/4/2017 6:34:00 AM
Holy macaroni this is good! :) xomo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/5/2017 6:30:00 AM
:) it shows
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/4/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen - this one is special to me, for many reasons. :-)
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