Gone

Gone Morals lost In a world Losing full sight Of the importance What it means to give love What it means to sacrifice What it means to do what is right We are all equal in lives granted United we must be, equality Heidi Sands 10/8/17

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2017 11:15:00 AM

Sad to say but it seems that our world has gone back in the dark ages when it comes to moral standards..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2017 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Sara :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/13/2017 11:11:00 AM

I love this statement Heidi and yes wouldn't it be wonderful if we were all equal in this world. Great one. love phyl

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you Phyllis :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/9/2017 2:23:00 PM

A powerful statement and a wonderful message, Heidi ! xxooo

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2017 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Mike! Happy Monday :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2017 4:10:00 AM

This is a grand message to all that read it my friend! A rather awesome write Heidi, I loved the way you wove in the expectations of what is important and how we are all equal in this world, we all have our ups and downs, and our struggles are all similar! What a special piece, quite the stunning write, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2017 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Russell for your positive feedback this morning. Making me smile :) Have a nice day.!

Joseph May

Date: 10/8/2017 7:09:00 PM

True words Heidi, we are slowly slipping into the mire

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2017 7:10:00 PM

Yes, Joseph, so true. Thank you for your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/8/2017 7:07:00 PM

A lovely message to humanity!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2017 7:09:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)