Goldfish Gaps
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Goldfish Gaps
I dreamt of a place where water is free,
Be a shore where water laps constantly,
See those like me and those differently,
Still there I glimpse no water against me,
Interned I sensed no source within to flee,
Beyond this glass bowl ... fades my memory.
2020 February 23
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND 3 to 14 line
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 August 21
*HM*
Bite Size Poem no17
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2021 August 19
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