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Golden Mask

Am I the one That stands in the way?
The mind that drips
like ice in the heat.
Fully formed, but incapable to think.
Amongst the crowd, my voice is loud.
In the dark, do I have the heart?
What's plain to them, ain't so much for me
so a noble steed carried me off to his dream.
I have lived there a thousands years
Off the flesh of the one who brought me here.
Now I lay in his past wearing the golden mask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 8:45:00 PM
I read a poem before and it wasn't anything like this.
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:38:00 PM
Sawyer, hope to see a new one by you...SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2013 4:05:00 AM
- Hello new member: Sawyer. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:21:00 AM
Sawyer,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/30/2013 5:08:00 PM
Sawyer, how can I put this. It's like viewing a poem with a happy ending. I love how you reveal more than beauty, through this mask. Welcome to Poetry soup....luv....linda
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