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Golden Leaves of Autumn Delight

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November 13, 2023

Placed 1st: Quatern Old or New by Joseph May
Placed 1st: Any Poem Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

Placed 9th: No. 1257 Premium Contest By Brian Strand

Golden leaves of autumn delight Where season flaunts hints of romance Blazing passions of smitten sight As themes chromatic swirl and dance. Charming dreams of romantic eyes Golden leaves of autumn delight As twilight blushes on mauve skies Lauding missives of zealous night. While amber notions waltz in flight Spurring thrill of flaxen meadows, Golden leaves of autumn delight As tunes of love heartbeats compose. Crimson motifs gelid winds blow Twirling, whirling, as they alight, Where gilded canvas glints on snow Golden leaves of autumn delight.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2023 6:25:00 PM

Dear Vijay, your enchanted pen spills Autumn allure upon the poetic page. Lovely imagery and vivid use of color animates Fall beauty with emotion and texture.. your artistic magic knows no bounds my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/3/2023 6:53:00 PM

Vijay, you've penned another beauty! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Joseph May

Date: 12/3/2023 8:27:00 AM

Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on your win

Maria Williams

Date: 11/22/2023 3:55:00 AM

Your golden ink has done it again dear Vijay. 'Where gilded canvas glints on snow Golden leaves of autumn delight' How beautiful. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/21/2023 12:16:00 PM

Pure loveliness, Vijay, in "flaxen meadows," "crimson motifs," "season flaunts hints of romance." A beautiful journey of sightseeing for "golden leaves of autumn delight!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving! May it be delightful for you!

Judy Ball

Date: 11/19/2023 12:40:00 PM

Beautiful Vijay. This brings all the colors of Autumn into the room with you. Lovely. God Bless and congrats. JB

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/19/2023 9:13:00 AM

This is so nice to read today. It brightened my day. A Fave for me. Thank you !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2023 12:25:00 PM

Glad to see you my friend. Much appreciate your comments and your FAVE, Heidi. Hope you are doing better. Please, take care of yourself.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2023 6:46:00 AM

“Lauding missives of zealous night” Love the words, so near jealous and surprising! Love the colors and swirls of romance. “Crimson motifs gelid winds blow.” Such a lovely wordsmith, you are!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2023 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate, my friend.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/18/2023 1:28:00 AM

Wow, this is magical. I love this! I wish I had such beauty of the autumn in the area where I live. You painted it so well through your words that I felt I could really see it, and feel it. Beautiful!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:06:00 AM

Glad to see you again, BJ. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Karen Jones

Date: 11/17/2023 11:46:00 PM

Love the colorful imagery in this poem! Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:06:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Karen--many thanks.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/17/2023 4:29:00 PM

Here where I live in Ne Ohio we get plenty of gold. But also bright reds, oranges, even rust colored. Pretty poem

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:05:00 AM

We have those too. Many thanks Tom for your visit and kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/17/2023 2:56:00 PM

your poems are always a winner to me, Congrats Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:05:00 AM

So very kind of you--many thanks, Vienna.

Deb M

Date: 11/17/2023 2:39:00 PM

Another wonderful Vijay poem full of delightful imagery and words! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Deb--much appreciate, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2023 2:33:00 PM

I am back with congratulations on your winning work in the contest.. Way to go. Sara K

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit, Sara. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/17/2023 11:03:00 AM

Vijay, your title perfectly sets the tone for this lovely seasonal write! As usual, your crisp and expressive imagery captures attention throughout! A beautiful poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Mike--glad to see you again, my friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/17/2023 7:56:00 AM

"While amber notions waltz in flight Spurring thrill of flaxen meadows, Golden leaves of autumn delight As tunes of love heartbeats compose." Very beautiful, original use of language. Autumn is a wonder, as your poem delightfully pays tribute. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:03:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, my friend. Much appreciate and value your visit and comments, Joe. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/16/2023 3:10:00 PM

Your canvass is as golden as your pen dear writer, you encourage me to keep going :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:02:00 AM

Many thanks my friend ---much appreciate, Vienna.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/15/2023 2:25:00 PM

Brilliant work, Vijay and you taught me a new word. I love how gelid resonates with gilded. Another delightful read on my favorite season. The beautiful leaves twirling and whirling down, Best, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you SuZ--glad to see you again. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/15/2023 1:21:00 AM

Superb as usual. Blessings

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/14/2023 8:03:00 PM

As "twilight blushes on mauve skies, charming dreams waltz in flight." So beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts curl around the soft and serene sensations of the season, moments of lasting love and perfect passion. Such a magical time, indeed ! The delightful touch of Autumn. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 6:01:00 AM

Delighted by your visit , as always, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/14/2023 3:16:00 PM

Stunning autumnal quatern dear Vijay. Vivid, delightful imagery and exquisite, poetic lines,’ As twilight blushes on mauve skies’ ‘ While amber notions waltz in flight’ - glorious! Love the romantic inclusion too. Autumn is a romantic season. Love the refrain line which works so well and enhances the poems flow. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2023 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Christina--much appreciate, as always.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/14/2023 1:21:00 PM

I love the poem's beautiful images, and its dramatic refrain, and also the breath of romance in the air. A brilliant work, Vijay. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2023 4:46:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Evelyn.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/14/2023 12:39:00 PM

Lovely, vividly descriptive quatern with an especially effective repeat line. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2023 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments. as always.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/14/2023 10:51:00 AM

Quatern - one of my favorite forms and your write them so well, and seemingly so effortlessly. A beautiful, romantic fall season. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2023 12:54:00 PM

So very kind of you Linda. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thank for your visit.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2023 7:47:00 AM

Ahh!! A fall romance in the air. A nice cozy time to fall in love where there could be a chance of hot chocolate and toasted marshmallows. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2023 12:52:00 PM

Hot chocolate and toasted marshmallows--sounds like a delightful party in your garden. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Sara. Many thanks.