Vijay Pandit Poet Quatern

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November 13, 2023

Placed 1st: Quatern Old or New by Joseph May
Placed 1st: Any Poem Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

Placed 9th: No. 1257 Premium Contest By Brian Strand

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Golden Leaves of Autumn Delight

Golden leaves of autumn delight
Where season flaunts hints of romance
Blazing passions of smitten sight
As themes chromatic swirl and dance.

Charming dreams of romantic eyes
Golden leaves of autumn delight
As twilight blushes on mauve skies
Lauding missives of zealous night.

While amber notions waltz in flight
Spurring thrill of flaxen meadows,
Golden leaves of autumn delight
As tunes of love heartbeats compose.

Crimson motifs gelid winds blow
Twirling, whirling, as they alight,
Where gilded canvas glints on snow
Golden leaves of autumn delight.

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Susan Ashley December 6, 2023 at 6:25 PM Dear Vijay, your enchanted pen spills Autumn allure upon the poetic page. Lovely imagery and vivid use of color animates Fall beauty with emotion and texture.. your artistic magic knows no bounds my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Janice Canerdy December 3, 2023 at 6:53 PM Vijay, you've penned another beauty! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Joseph May December 3, 2023 at 8:27 AM Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on your win

Maria Williams November 22, 2023 at 3:55 AM Your golden ink has done it again dear Vijay. 'Where gilded canvas glints on snow Golden leaves of autumn delight' How beautiful. Hugs

Sam Kauffman November 21, 2023 at 12:16 PM Pure loveliness, Vijay, in "flaxen meadows," "crimson motifs," "season flaunts hints of romance." A beautiful journey of sightseeing for "golden leaves of autumn delight!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving! May it be delightful for you!

Judy Ball November 19, 2023 at 12:40 PM Beautiful Vijay. This brings all the colors of Autumn into the room with you. Lovely. God Bless and congrats. JB

Heidi Sands November 19, 2023 at 9:13 AM This is so nice to read today. It brightened my day. A Fave for me. Thank you ! Vijay Pandit November 19, 2023 at 12:25 PM Glad to see you my friend. Much appreciate your comments and your FAVE, Heidi. Hope you are doing better. Please, take care of yourself.

Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2023 at 6:46 AM “Lauding missives of zealous night” Love the words, so near jealous and surprising! Love the colors and swirls of romance. “Crimson motifs gelid winds blow.” Such a lovely wordsmith, you are! Vijay Pandit November 19, 2023 at 12:21 PM Thank you Kim--much appreciate, my friend.

Bj Legros Kelley November 18, 2023 at 1:28 AM Wow, this is magical. I love this! I wish I had such beauty of the autumn in the area where I live. You painted it so well through your words that I felt I could really see it, and feel it. Beautiful! Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:06 AM Glad to see you again, BJ. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Karen Jones November 17, 2023 at 11:46 PM Love the colorful imagery in this poem! Good luck in the contest! Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:06 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Karen--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 17, 2023 at 2:56 PM your poems are always a winner to me, Congrats Vijay :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:05 AM So very kind of you--many thanks, Vienna.

Deb M November 17, 2023 at 2:39 PM Another wonderful Vijay poem full of delightful imagery and words! Debx Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:04 AM Thank you Deb--much appreciate, my friend.

Sara Kendrick November 17, 2023 at 2:33 PM I am back with congratulations on your winning work in the contest.. Way to go. Sara K Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:04 AM Thank you for your return visit, Sara. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile November 17, 2023 at 11:03 AM Vijay, your title perfectly sets the tone for this lovely seasonal write! As usual, your crisp and expressive imagery captures attention throughout! A beautiful poem! Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:03 AM Thank you Mike--glad to see you again, my friend.

Joseph P. DiMino November 17, 2023 at 7:56 AM "While amber notions waltz in flight Spurring thrill of flaxen meadows, Golden leaves of autumn delight As tunes of love heartbeats compose." Very beautiful, original use of language. Autumn is a wonder, as your poem delightfully pays tribute. Blessings. Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:03 AM Glad you liked the poem, my friend. Much appreciate and value your visit and comments, Joe. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 16, 2023 at 3:10 PM Your canvass is as golden as your pen dear writer, you encourage me to keep going :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:02 AM Many thanks my friend ---much appreciate, Vienna.

Suzanne Delaney November 15, 2023 at 2:25 PM Brilliant work, Vijay and you taught me a new word. I love how gelid resonates with gilded. Another delightful read on my favorite season. The beautiful leaves twirling and whirling down, Best, SuZ Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:02 AM Thank you SuZ--glad to see you again. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Victor Buhagiar November 15, 2023 at 1:21 AM Superb as usual. Blessings Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:01 AM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole November 14, 2023 at 8:03 PM As "twilight blushes on mauve skies, charming dreams waltz in flight." So beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts curl around the soft and serene sensations of the season, moments of lasting love and perfect passion. Such a magical time, indeed ! The delightful touch of Autumn. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 6:01 AM Delighted by your visit , as always, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Christina Bowring November 14, 2023 at 3:16 PM Stunning autumnal quatern dear Vijay. Vivid, delightful imagery and exquisite, poetic lines,’ As twilight blushes on mauve skies’ ‘ While amber notions waltz in flight’ - glorious! Love the romantic inclusion too. Autumn is a romantic season. Love the refrain line which works so well and enhances the poems flow. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you. :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2023 at 5:59 AM Thank you Christina--much appreciate, as always.

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 14, 2023 at 1:21 PM I love the poem's beautiful images, and its dramatic refrain, and also the breath of romance in the air. A brilliant work, Vijay. :) Vijay Pandit November 14, 2023 at 4:46 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Evelyn.

Janice Canerdy November 14, 2023 at 12:39 PM Lovely, vividly descriptive quatern with an especially effective repeat line. Janice Vijay Pandit November 14, 2023 at 12:54 PM Thank you Janice. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit and comments. as always.

Linda Alice Fowler November 14, 2023 at 10:51 AM Quatern - one of my favorite forms and your write them so well, and seemingly so effortlessly. A beautiful, romantic fall season. :) Vijay Pandit November 14, 2023 at 12:54 PM So very kind of you Linda. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thank for your visit.

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2023 at 7:47 AM Ahh!! A fall romance in the air. A nice cozy time to fall in love where there could be a chance of hot chocolate and toasted marshmallows. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Vijay Pandit November 14, 2023 at 12:52 PM Hot chocolate and toasted marshmallows--sounds like a delightful party in your garden. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Sara. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet November 14, 2023 at 7:39 AM Vijay, your poetic masterpiece exudes an exquisite tapestry of enchanting imagery and a harmonious cadence. Each verse resonates deeply within me, evoking the sensory bliss of reliving the ethereal beauty of autumn leaves. Your skillful manipulation of colors and the eloquent portrayal of the golden foliage bewitchingly captivate the reader's imagination. An excellent poem. BOL for the contest Vijay Pandit November 14, 2023 at 12:51 PM Once again, I am in debt of your positive, helpful feedback, my friend. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks, Lasaad.

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