Golden Fields

I see golden fields, I think of her.
Running, playing, laughing.
I look at the hot fire, I think of her.
Gone, smoke bellowing into the sky.
She is everywhere, but no-where.
For years and years, time plays tricks.
It all feels like yesterday, only yesterday.
This is what lack of closure does.
Without it, the heart mourns endlessly.
Within the body it lies, no-one sees.
Flowing like all rivers into an ocean.
So vast that it engulfs, one is lost.
Turbulent waves all around, crashing.
She was a child, smile so cheerful bright.
The messenger left behind, words stolen.
Silent places in the corners of the mind.
Thieves always standing in the darkness.
Yet, I can still feel her hand.

Heidi Sands
1/26/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kinch  Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:31 AM
So beautifully sad. Really touched me.
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment Elizabeth!
Pett Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:16 AM
Such a beautiful poem, I could feel the pain and sadness, so well written.
Sands Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Thank you very much Roy!
Mccall Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 6:44 PM
This is a very sad and heart rending poem yet very beautiful as well. I'm so sorry for your loss
Sands Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Thank you , Edward. I appreciate your comment.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:29 AM
A very touching and sad poem, Heidi. I am so sorry for your loss. A tragically emotive poem. The truth contained in your words are universal. A stellar poem. Love and peace to you always.
Sands Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Thank you very much Freddie. I appreciate your support :)
Green Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Such a sad and heartbreaking poem Heidi. This one touched me deeply, it is something I can sadly relate to. I can feel you in this, your emotions are strong.
Sands Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Actually, sorry to hear you can relate to this Chris. Thanks for your visit ...my friend.
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