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Oh, Mark was such a foolish and sluggish young man. His mother sent him away with everything she can. Go sell our last sheep and fetch me some money. So we can buy clothes and food, must rush, honey! Mark strolled aimlessly, wasting precious time. A strange man soon joined the boy in his prime. If you wish to be wealthy, I'll show you how to leap. For such mystic seeds, you must give me your sheep. Mark took some beans and went back to his mother. "Son, you're so strange, quite unlike any other. with no wealth, no money, and no food to eat. Winter will come, and we won't even have heat. She threw all the seeds through the air to the ground. and placed Mark to bed without emitting a sound. And as they were both sleepings, a stem quickly grew. Its branches managed to reach high into the sky blue. Mark leaped from his bed and dared not stop. Until he reached the pinnacle of the hilltop, They joined a palace in search of treasure. Even so, he soon became aware of the awful ledger. Mark peered out and saw the obelisk yell at his hen. Lay my golden eggs, or I'll send you back to your pen! when gold eggs ultimately covered the floor. Oh, Mother, assist me! Mark yelled from his core.
3rd place contest winner Written: April 03, 2023 Write A Sweet Fairytale For Children With A Good Outcome Ending, Ie Nobody Gets Hurt :) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 5/6/2023 9:44:00 PM
Oh my goodness Sotto, with the price of eggs these days they may as well be golden! Fun twist on ole' Jack's tale :) Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your poem! We truly enjoyed and appreciated your nice format :)
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Date: 5/6/2023 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, BJ, and for my placement in your contest.
Date: 4/5/2023 11:31:00 AM
Wonderful Sotto, I really enjoyed the read… Belle
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Date: 4/5/2023 8:48:00 AM
Captivating, magical tale Lasaad….just lovely! Debx
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Date: 4/4/2023 12:46:00 PM
- He wasn't that stupid after all ... what luck that he got hold of this "golden hen" ... full of imagination and a joy to read, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy Easter - hugs
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Date: 4/4/2023 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful fairytale, my friend. Enjoyed the happy ending of your magical story.
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Date: 4/4/2023 1:49:00 AM
Quite an imaginative story, Sotto:)
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Date: 4/3/2023 10:02:00 PM
There is no limit to your imagination dear Lasaad ! An grossing story. I am sure Mark and his mother lived happy ever after, selling the golden eggs and procuring a lot of money for the rest of their lives! All the Best in the contest, friend.
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