Notes About The Poem

Golden Disks and Whale Clicks

mind song riffs
joining the back beat
nature clicks
timpani 
drums of black thunder
percuss 
then the sky opens

a luminous landing 
off gasses 	from the heat shield 
rainbow across a spectrum of light

Cam’s Glieseian tongue flew over the 
surface of the audio generator
Voyager’s golden disk long gone now
transposes across a film of galactic plasma
the taste of whale and bird song  	they tongue
enthralls them—though they had no notion of
whales or birds

mind song cascades, scrolls, behind the visitors opaque orbs
joining the back beat	nature clicks	woodpecker tunes
tympanic membranes shiver upon
	retractable body hair
drums of black thunder roll
past helmetless crowns
percussing  their brain stems
	orgasmically 
then the sky opens

Sol’s a black dwarf    they are too late
but still 	the songs sang 
Cam tongued the plasma film
once more 	then reentered interstellar 
hibernation


First Published by Eye to the Telescope 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kiser Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Excellent...Excellent...I am right there, floating along in space.
Guzzi Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:28 PM
How lovely of you to take the time to comment! Light & Love Always
Anish Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 10:37 AM
A little science fiction here! Enjoyed - and please comment on Chess haiku Peace & Love Matthew Anish
DiMino Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Lots of great imagery. Great read! Thank you.
Goff Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Deb, tantalizing free astral association as the reader floats on waves of sensual & tactile discovery! i like it when my brain stem percusses....rare, for sure! jim
Delaney Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:52 AM
If all the sounds of Nature belong to us alone, in all the Universe- your poem really accentuates that miracle. A pleasure to read today, Hugs, SuZ
Anish Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Mystical work in a modern form. Very nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thanks Richard, I have always loved sci-fi & fantasy. Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Holy "Space Balls" Debbie, this caused my mind to shift dimensions. A most enjoyable read.
Ahmad Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 5:55 AM
Hi Debbie! i m glad to tell you that my poem silence has been published. i am really thankful for the corrections you made in my first (full of Spelling mistakes) draft. ( Not sure how many in this msg). regards, ijaz
Rider Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Beautiful Debbie!
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You've taken my mind on a galactic voyage. Thanks it was very nice.
Fleming Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Hi, Debbie. I have read through several of your poems this early morning...all good stuff of course. I particularly like this one; love this sort of poetry contained within celestial themes - Very nicely crafted indeed! My very best regards, Debbie! :) john. P.s A seven.
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