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Golden Corona

Spinning orb of blue

Astronauts view bright sunrise

Golden corona

Emerging to heat the Earth

Plants await sun's nourishment

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James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 11:35 AM

Loved it first time round, and I sure do again. Many congratulations on your win Carolyn, nice one....:)

John Freeman

March 23, 2011 at 8:49 PM

Great to see your poem honored HM. Carolyn, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

March 23, 2011 at 6:37 AM

Nice thinking in your Tanka Carolina.Enjoyed,Congrats on your win---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2011 at 5:04 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Carolyn in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2011 at 10:35 PM

Congratulations, CArolyn. This was a good one. Be glad you did not write about a bird like I did. There were many awesome "nature scenes" depicted by these two colors!

Tahera Mannan

March 22, 2011 at 9:02 PM

A wonderul image dear Carolyn. Very warm congrats for this win.

Francine Roberts

March 22, 2011 at 4:37 PM

love it Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2011 at 3:49 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Gwendolen Song

March 22, 2011 at 12:41 PM

Nice view of your poem from way up here in the solar system! Creative angle and carefully selected verbs-spinning -viewing-emerging. Now a new fav of mine. Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

March 19, 2011 at 8:28 PM

Carolyn- I am learning so much about forms of poetry via the soup. I love Tanka. This one is superb. Added to my Favorite. ~Joey

George Aul

March 8, 2011 at 11:27 AM

This one is a great picture....Good luck and thanks for the comments and contest ..... George

James Fraser

March 6, 2011 at 4:13 PM

Exceptional title Carolyn, with I had thought of this one. I think I'm having the privilage of reading and commenting on the winner. I'll be back....:) smiles

Carol Fillmore

March 6, 2011 at 3:57 PM

love the first line Carolyn, I see that spinning orb of blue vividly! Best of luck in the contest:) Thanks for your comment on Sunday, March 6. Yes, it's end of winter angst. Rain more often now, either by itself or mixed with snow. It's the slush I detest!! Everything looks dingy and the snow's dirty...yuck;)) at least with the rain, the snow is disappearing somewhat!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 5, 2011 at 4:32 PM

Beautiful , Carolyn, I love the imagery...earth from God's view! Functioning as planned by Him...you know my love for creation. I really enjoyed this poem. Love, Dane Ann

Diane Locksley

March 5, 2011 at 10:34 AM

Very descriptive. You took me out of this world with your perspective. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane

Harry Horsman

March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM

like this Carolyn, good luck in the contest, i've got plenty of Blue poems, but no gold, till i read this. hope you don't mind if i bounce off your Tanka. Love Harry