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Gold Could Not Be So Lovely

A melting river, a tree's return A respite from the winter's burn Where thin leaves capture the sun's might To briefly hold the weight of light An elusive bloom in a fragile berth And the heavens envy the warmth of earth Even as day falls to gray and languishes there Gold could not be so lovely, were it not rare

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Date: 5/26/2023 11:08:00 PM
EnJOYable rhymes
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Date: 5/2/2023 10:17:00 PM
Hi Michelle. I'm a sucker for any rhyming poem, certainly for any good rhyme, definitely for any great rhyme, and most certainly, definitely for any superb rhyme such as this. A very worthy POTD. My belated congratulations for POTD and my belated congratulations anyway even if it hadn't been awarded POTD. Its a wonderful poem. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 3/10/2023 10:47:00 PM
Michelle, I keep reading the lines "An elusive bloom in a fragile berth And the heavens envy the warmth of earth" over and over, admiring their delicate warmth. I guess this is the counterpoint to your "Spring Is Not All" poem, eh? I agree with the poet who compared this favorable with Frost's writing of the seasons: earthy, luminous, genuine. You can almost smell the rich soil. I applaud your POTD, my soul is always enriched by your Midas touch ~ John
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Date: 3/6/2023 7:54:00 AM
A life giving joy returns to the tree which was thirsting for Spring and respite from the bitter cold, to bask its leaves sun bathing in the warmth of the golden light which our sun selflessly gives Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/2/2023 7:51:00 PM
I missed seeing this as POTD as I have been away from home for a few days. You have painted such beautiful scenes. Belated Congratulations, Michelle on your well derved honor.
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Date: 3/2/2023 6:02:00 AM
Swoon. I’m a little in love with your muse. Belated congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 2/28/2023 8:03:00 AM
Back to SAY, well done CHISELLER WITH A FOREST OF WORDS. Peace & Love. And respect for Your ART/HEART
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Date: 2/27/2023 6:14:00 AM
See, I told you this was better, congratulations on a well deserved POTD:)
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Date: 2/27/2023 12:38:00 AM
Belated congratulations Michelle on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:48:00 PM
A delight AND POTD!! ~;o]
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:30:00 PM
Yes, all that glittering is not gold, gold is not so ever lovely and beauty can not stay forever beautiful; nice to read your poetic theme and congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Date: 2/26/2023 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Michelle yourpeticskiila are heavenly! Panagiota
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:58:00 PM
Simply beautiful. A big congrats on potd, Michelle :)
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:55:00 PM
"Where thin leaves capture the sun's might, to briefly hold the weight of light." Such a beautiful image you paint, Michelle. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:11:00 PM
This is such a lovely welcome to spring. Another bloom another rebirth. Thank you Michelle. Best - Ken
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Date: 2/26/2023 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Michelle. Congratulations on POTD. love eve
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Date: 2/26/2023 1:39:00 PM
Congradulations on POTD! "Where thin leaves capture the sun's might To briefly hold the weight of light" potent ink <3 A.S.
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Date: 2/26/2023 12:44:00 PM
Michelle, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/26/2023 12:37:00 PM
Gorgeous! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 2/26/2023 11:00:00 AM
I love the imagery and perfect rhyme, Michelle. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/26/2023 10:18:00 AM
I can hear Frost applauding in the snowy wood......fantastic write
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Date: 2/26/2023 9:44:00 AM
"And the heavens envy the warmth of earth"...I'll bet they do. Great piece for POTD, Michelle.
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Date: 2/26/2023 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Michele! Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry my friend. Bill
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:03:00 AM
A exquisite picture this poem creates in the readers mind Michelle. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 2/26/2023 7:25:00 AM
Pure gold flowing from your skilled pen, Michelle! Congrats on POTD! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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