Gold Could Not Be So Lovely

A melting river, a tree's return
A respite from the winter's burn
Where thin leaves capture the sun's might
To briefly hold the weight of light
An elusive bloom in a fragile berth
And the heavens envy the warmth of earth
Even as day falls to gray and languishes there
Gold could not be so lovely, were it not rare
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Deo Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 11:08 PM
EnJOYable rhymes
Radice Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Hi Michelle. I'm a sucker for any rhyming poem, certainly for any good rhyme, definitely for any great rhyme, and most certainly, definitely for any superb rhyme such as this. A very worthy POTD. My belated congratulations for POTD and my belated congratulations anyway even if it hadn't been awarded POTD. Its a wonderful poem. Cheers - Gary
Watt Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 10:47 PM
Michelle, I keep reading the lines "An elusive bloom in a fragile berth And the heavens envy the warmth of earth" over and over, admiring their delicate warmth. I guess this is the counterpoint to your "Spring Is Not All" poem, eh? I agree with the poet who compared this favorable with Frost's writing of the seasons: earthy, luminous, genuine. You can almost smell the rich soil. I applaud your POTD, my soul is always enriched by your Midas touch ~ John
Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 7:54 AM
A life giving joy returns to the tree which was thirsting for Spring and respite from the bitter cold, to bask its leaves sun bathing in the warmth of the golden light which our sun selflessly gives Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
George Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 7:51 PM
I missed seeing this as POTD as I have been away from home for a few days. You have painted such beautiful scenes. Belated Congratulations, Michelle on your well derved honor.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Swoon. I’m a little in love with your muse. Belated congratulations on POTD! xomo
Deo Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Back to SAY, well done CHISELLER WITH A FOREST OF WORDS. Peace & Love. And respect for Your ART/HEART
Daniel Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:14 AM
See, I told you this was better, congratulations on a well deserved POTD:)
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:38 AM
Belated congratulations Michelle on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Parker Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:48 PM
A delight AND POTD!! ~;o]
Bangalee Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Yes, all that glittering is not gold, gold is not so ever lovely and beauty can not stay forever beautiful; nice to read your poetic theme and congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Romios Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations, Michelle yourpeticskiila are heavenly! Panagiota
Chuuk Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:58 PM
Simply beautiful. A big congrats on potd, Michelle :)
Nicole Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:55 PM
"Where thin leaves capture the sun's might, to briefly hold the weight of light." Such a beautiful image you paint, Michelle. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rone Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:11 PM
This is such a lovely welcome to spring. Another bloom another rebirth. Thank you Michelle. Best - Ken
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Beautiful verse, Michelle. Congratulations on POTD. love eve
Scorpio Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Congradulations on POTD! "Where thin leaves capture the sun's might To briefly hold the weight of light" potent ink <3 A.S.
La France Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Michelle, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Gorgeous! Congrats on POTD!
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 11:00 AM
I love the imagery and perfect rhyme, Michelle. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
Lawless Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:18 AM
I can hear Frost applauding in the snowy wood......fantastic write
Slaughter Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 9:44 AM
"And the heavens envy the warmth of earth"...I'll bet they do. Great piece for POTD, Michelle.
Baker Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Michele! Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry my friend. Bill
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February 26, 2023 at 8:03 AM
A exquisite picture this poem creates in the readers mind Michelle. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Wolf Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Pure gold flowing from your skilled pen, Michelle! Congrats on POTD! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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