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My elderly auntie named Dot her memory’s going to pot For she served me raw food and was totally nude A dinner I’ve never forgot 7/27/18

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Date: 8/6/2018 12:25:00 PM
Well, Jan, I've often been served dinner "al fresco", but never "clothing optional". If Auntie Dot was once "hot" and keeps up this "dinner in the raw" bit, let's hope that her "memory" is all that's "going to pot".
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/6/2018 1:52:00 PM
lol Jim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2018 7:54:00 PM
She Dotted her i's, I see. Did she cross her T's?! ~ gw
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:22:00 AM
ha ha ha that is hilarious!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/29/2018 10:42:00 PM
G'day Jan … you pay big money in a restaurant for this service - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 7/30/2018 7:12:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) I wonder if customers complain about the wrinkled outfits lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2018 4:53:00 PM
Jan, I cannot stop laughing. I am crying, as I picture an ELDERLY aunt doing this!
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thankfully its just fiction but I can imagine it happening! I woke up a few days ago with the first 4 lines and then finally finished the other day but I try not to post more than one poem a day so this was on hold lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/28/2018 3:20:00 PM
Love chicken and fish, but not raw, unless its genuine shushi or oysters. Good limerick, Jan. As for golf, I've never played the game and all that walking is not for me. Thanks for stopping by. / M
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Date: 7/28/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Maurice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/28/2018 7:26:00 AM
I really like this one Jan. I think that would be very memorable!!....A FAV for me!!.............pat
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Pat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 11:45:00 AM
Great one, Jan, I always enjoy your funny entertaining limericks. John
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:48:00 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 11:21:00 AM
Love it, your limericks always entertain!
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 10:30:00 AM
Love it. Perfect flow, Jan. Traumatized for life, I'm sure.
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 9:22:00 AM
I too knew your auntie named dot....she is the reason I started smoking pot....just to get to the point....she liked to roll joints....and we always smoked the whole lot....lol....you should be on stage with your jokes jan.…;)
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Eric, I have been on stage a couple of times with my poetry - the last one was in front of over 600 people including my elderly mum - will never forget it. They had my name as 'Allinson' in the programme and a friend of ours was at the performance. I asked him what he thought of my poems and he said oh were you there ... he hadn't recognised me in a dress and heels lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Jan... you made me smile this morning...
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:16:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 8:14:00 AM
Youre elderly auntie named Dot // knew there something she forgot // she served you raw food // when totally nude // then put herself in the pot. // Barry
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:16:00 AM
lol thanks Barry a great limerick response:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 8:08:00 AM
Jan, you just made me laugh out loud. A great limerick, You are the best! // Warren :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Warren I try and make folks smile with my silly poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 8:08:00 AM
Hilarious!!! Love it Jan ;D xomo!
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/27/2018 7:26:00 AM
Haha a gem Jan. Did you order a takeaway?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/27/2018 7:33:00 AM
lol no and thankfully its a fiction poem!:-) hugs Jan xx