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*G.oing H.aiku* (-: *C.razy* :-)

** G.H.C.** by: P.D. _________ (* BROKEN *) Steping on dried leaves The earthquake under my feet 7 years bad luck~~ ****************************** ________ (* ANGRY *) Breathing out steam I hate all your excuses Gurrrrr!~~ ****************************** ___________ (* TWILIGHT *) With a moonlight kiss One night and it's all over Happy hunting days~~ ****************************** _____________ (* BLOOD LUST *) I need your fang-s Bite real deep into my soul My blood is all yours~~ ****************************** __________ (* WAITING *) Insomnia has me Keep me by your finger tip I am still awake~~ ****************************** __________ (* LIFELESS *) Your my addiction Hypnotize like a zombie Feeding off your brain~~ ****************************** _________ (* HUNGRY *) Feeding the wolf-ffff Bloody leaves under body Nature takes it's course~~ ******************************* _______________ (* SWEET & SOUR *) Wetter than a dream Drowning the moon in the sea I am all you see~~ ******************************* ___________ (* TOGETHER *) Across the mountain Never a last fantasy Soon you will be mine~~ ******************************* __________ (* CRUSHED *) Broken night whisper Tears upon the cotton bed Silk like the storm cloud~~ ******************************* _______________ (* MY EVERYTHING *) You are my sunlight Eclipse covering my pain Moon and stars above~~ ****************************** _______________ (* LAST CHANCE *) It's now or never I need you more than roses Kissing does not help~~ ******************************* ;-) to my love (-: Nathan Dilts ;-) from P.D. (-:

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Date: 2/4/2016 11:26:00 PM
awe so cute, wehn you in love **SKAT**
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:27:00 PM
lol, enjoyed reading these again, my friend
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Date: 7/2/2012 9:29:00 AM
lovely haiku : ) hope you have a great week, PD
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:02:00 PM
hi there pd :) I did say I would be away I think it lasted for a total of one day-- just needed to bounce back--typical me now I seem to be back?? who knows, I just might be able to go haiku crazzzy and make it to your contest-- tick tock tick tock for me --crammer mode now --and that guy on my pic--hmm don't you think he looks like me?? having an identity crisis here... enjoy your day now see you later
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:27:00 AM
Its all been said much better than I ... brava and congrates on the wonderful poetry love Jayne x x
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:28:00 PM
Cool and crazy!!! Great series of random haiku thoughts! A great example for your contest. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:00:00 PM
Trying to get an idea from this, how you want your contest approached. This is not helping me. This is very random stuff. haha. and I like some kind of common theme. But I am guessing you WANT it all crazy mixed up? May the best crazy win!! LUv, Andrea ps. hope you won't think I am trying to copy ya. I have been planning my contest for a while now and it's on haiku too. But not like yours at all! I really love haiku.
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:57:00 AM
Haiku crazy it is, and every one a gem. Happy Sunday to you p.d. >> James :)
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:15:00 PM
I went Haiku crazy today 2 ,only mine I wrote in the 60ties.... beepob dooowoopo! I cant believe we both have Insomnia ha ha you r good. thanks for reading my work . I am new here , and I will read more of yours later ...
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Date: 9/25/2010 2:00:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing. I haven't written any Haiku's yet but you are truly inspiring.
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Date: 9/19/2010 9:33:00 AM
This is one of your elements. I like these mucho, like for instance, "Sweet and sour" - You have a refreshing style and vivid imagination. Don't ever lose them. Dave. P.S.don't capitalize in Haiku. But then, in your case, I think you might come off great no matter what you do. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:59:00 AM
Fine haiku - and you stuck to the 5-7-5 format. Good show! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/16/2010 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on having two poems at the top of the HOT POEMS list as of tonight... this is awesome and so meaningful... hope u agree my P.D. BBF... how is Nate feeling from all the hoopla one more time? POETRY... this is the key reason we are all here.. yet poets like to pick on all of us ... wonder why that is ... Nate is a good poet... hope all this stuff gets straightened out ...one more time... omg...the drama.. my wedding had drama but this is even over the top more..luv.. your BBF...
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Date: 9/16/2010 7:09:00 AM
Great blast of imagination here "crushed" and "sweet and sour' makes me delirus ... Nathan better know what he deserves ... a poet without exception.
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Date: 9/15/2010 3:19:00 PM
lovely warp of haikus. i bet it bites real deep into those twilight lovers! and real sweet at the end. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:00:00 PM
A great collection!
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Date: 9/15/2010 10:52:00 AM
An interesting collection of picture perfect imagery within these little haikus and then some! You sure got down to nature and all its business for these! Nice! Thanks for your welcome comments as ever, Anna-marie.
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:54:00 PM
holy haiky madness my friend great imagery within each and like others said hopes it's fictional lol also can see this in a magazine also thanks for all your kind comments on my stuff I will return soon to hit ya up again me behind yikes keep on forging ahead hu raaaaaa
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Date: 9/13/2010 1:06:00 PM
Very cool Haiku! Hope that this is all fiction and you are not really hurting this much........
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:47:00 AM
Wonderful Haikus, enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/12/2010 11:08:00 PM
P.D. I really love reading haiku of any type. And I very much enjoyed these poems. I had some real favorites here, especially the romantic ones. Cute tribute at the end. I am a big fan of True Blood, so I really liked Blood Lust! My suggestion. Since you do not post a whole lot of new poems daily, you should divide up these kinds so you maybe only do three at a time. I have at least 200 footles but I've only shown half of them so far by doing them in small groups! Just a suggestion! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:36:00 PM
What a wealth of Haiku you have spread here like gems my friend. All most all of them are embedded with the creative power of your writing skill. Great treasure which I think you should have posted one by one as many of them are quite serious and thought provoking. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet D.
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:33:00 PM
an amazing collection!
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Date: 9/12/2010 9:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading all these Haiku's today. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:17:00 AM
enjoyed reading today! Well played! me and my hunny had a spat last night.
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