God's Word

I move to a new place – from the desert of me to the oasis; from the valleys I have seeded to the peaks I have learned – though they blossom when we shower in our droughts hotly burn – “No substitute for God's word!” said the Dove to the Phoenix, both far wiser than any chirping garden bird –

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/13/2021 8:57:00 AM

Like the interweaving of thought and imagery. Line liked most..."though they blossom" ETC. GREAT INDIVIDUALITY, Prince de Mino! Pangie xx ok

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/13/2021 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie; I try to write a poem like tapestry -- sometimes it works. Apparently here I have succeeded somewhat. Thank you for taking precious time to read my work, and encourage my progress. Blessings my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/12/2021 10:52:00 AM

Beautifully done, Joe. This poem was a pleasure to read. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/12/2021 11:09:00 AM

Hi Evelyn; thank you. Have a beautiful day my friend!