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God's Spring Garden

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  I awoke this morning to birds singing.
  The dead silence that's been heard all winter.
  Now the harmonious sounds of life, as birds sing,  
  Sing about the new beginnings of life.

  God has sent His life's messengers to make known.
  It's time to wake up my beloved earth.
  The sun was different as its rays were brighter.
  The warmth caresses every part of the ground.

  Warmth has taken the place of the bitter, freezing rain.
  The dead coldness now has a chance of life.
  Sprinkles of green now emerge from the ground.
  As God ushers in a fresh season of life known as spring.

  I heard the sounds of birds singing.
  They are announcing the birth of their young.
  This morning I walked down a long and winding path.
  The garden path, that leads to many old friends.

  Daffodils greeted me as I continued down the trail.
  The trumpets, which are bright yellow and white, symbolize "rebirth."
  The little rays of sunshine bob their heads in greetings. 
  They smile and tip their heads, "Spring Welcomes You."

  I look across the garden at a sea of smiling faces.
  Their velvet petals change colors in the sunlight.
  The pansies are like children in spring.
  As their angelic faces glow with sweet innocence.

  God looked down on His spring garden and smiled.
  The scent of lilacs fills the warm air.
  The colors of pinks, purples, and whites are filled with life,
  Bees, butterflies, and hummingbirds make for a spectacular sight.

  I look at the cherry blooms and magnolias' showy colors.
  Pinks and whites combined into a spray: "A queen's delight."
  The bittersweet aroma and lemony scent now sear in my mind.
  A spicy scent is released as the warm sun and gentle breeze combine.

  A bright red cardinal sings, "Cheer, cheer, cheer; an angel is near."
  The caretakers of God's spring garden rejoice as they toil with delight.
  If you listen closely, you will hear them sing as the wind blows.
  They sing in pure delight as God touches each flower with His hand.

  As I neared the end of the garden path, tulips stood tall, waving in the wind.
  A sea of colors, reds, yellows, and purples are happy to see me.
  I smile in delight as each one has something to say about the garden.
  I turned to leave; a sign reads, "Heaven on Earth" ~ God


                                      Written on 3 -12- 2022
                              Garden Inspiration Poetry Contest
                                    Sponsor: BJ Kelly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Debra, there is so much beauty in every line - so much to see in every image that graces each stanza. This is serenity blooming! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of the Easter garden to you!
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Congratulations on your top contest win, Debra. You really deserve it with this stunning poem.
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Flowers of variety, cardinal singing... Beautiful painting. Congratulations!
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 5:27 PM
Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your first-place win in the contest! <3 ~BJ
Baker Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Reads like a winner to me, Debra. You've taken me by the hand and let me, through your poetry, to a place of pure serenity. A garden of breathtaking beauty, with eloquent sounds of spring's arrival. Thank you for this moment of peace and calm you have brought to me. I really needed this today. Bless you, my friend, Bill To my FAV's list :-)
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 6:49 PM
Thank, Bill for your words of encouragement. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Buhagiar Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Deserves a second reading with such a beautiful picture.
Brown Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 6:08 PM
Victor, so sweet to read this again. Hugs & Debra
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 11:38 PM
So joyful! I couldn't help but smile while reading through your entire poem Debra <3 Happy Spring sweet lady of the King! God's grace is upon the lovely garden, and shines through your lovely pen as well sweet friend! God bless you!! <3 ~BJ
Brown Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 6:35 PM
BJ, you are too kind with your words and so sweet to comment. I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 5:21 AM
Sweet line: A bright red cardinal sings, "Cheer, cheer, cheer; an angel is near."
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Thank you, Kim, for your sweet comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Horsman Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 8:12 PM
This truly is a wonderful poem, love the visual aspects Debra.
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Thank you, Harry, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
Pace Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 9:10 AM
What a wonderful poem. Beautifully written! God bless you! Brigitte
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Brigitte, for your words of encouragement Blessings ~ Debra
Buhagiar Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Great poem, so full of imagery. Deserves high placing.
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Victor, for your words of encouragement Blessings ~ Debra
Ball Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 9:34 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Debra. Wonderful description. I felt as though I walked through this garden with you. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Hi! Judy, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem, Thanks for your comment. Praying for you, my friend. Blessings ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Hymn to "The God of Spring and Hope." Great offering, sis Debra. I recall the first crocuses before daffodils, followed by Forsythia sunkets. ThanX in Jesus. Anil
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Thanks, Anil. I enjoyed your comment. Where I live, it's daffodils. They're starting to push their way through the mulch right now. We just had 8 inches of snow, but that didn't hurt them. Have a good night. Prayers and blessings Debra
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March 13, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Your poem exudes such color and life and joy, as the awakening world is celebrated, Debra. The picture is a real beauty, too. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
Sands Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 3:03 PM
Wow. This is a special and peaceful Spring Adventure. I enjoyed this. I am saving as a fave. Well done Deb :)
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Heidi, You are too kind with your words. I am honored that you are going to add this to your favorite collection. Hugs ~ Debra
Leffanta Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 12:23 PM
As I read your poem, I suddenly wondered why alarm clocks make such dreadful noises instead of some bird trills which are just as effective? Enjoyed! Aloha!
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Hi, Rico. Thank you for your comment, Rico...Blessings ~ Debra
Emate Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Heaven on earth indeed. Thank you for sharing. It captures the essence of God's creations. Nicely written. God bless.
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Thompson, for your words of encouragement Blessings ~ Debra
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 8:54 PM
Wow Debra! Just before I got to the end of your poem I was thinking how much it seemed like heaven. You have out done yourself with this gorgeous stunning beauty. I am Faving this my friend. I hope to see this at the top! Blessings xxoo
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, Connie, for your sweet comment. I always think of Heaven when I think of spring. I hummed you have chosen this poem as your favorite. Hugs ~ Debra
George Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 6:12 PM
This is wonderfully lovely, Debra ! I feel as if I have landed in an ethereal garden owned and directly taken care of by God ! A garden of myriad flowers of heavenly hues ! The image also is beautiful ! Wish you all the Best in the contest, dear!
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Vasal, your words are too kind. I'm happy you enjoyed this poem. When I picked out the photo, this is my visions heaven. Hugs ~ Debra
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Wonderful images of spring, Debra. Much enjoyed the vibrant voice of your poem.
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Vijay for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
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