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God's Presence

Light breaks through the shadow Tiny shards of light I know you’re searching for me In the dark of night I hear you speaking to me I can hear you crystal clear Your presence all around me I can feel you near Your love it breaks the silence Your light is shining through Angels wings brush by me Sweet breath of heaven’s dew

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Date: 8/14/2023 6:03:00 PM
Well writen. People don't believe it but the feeling is real. And the Holy ghost or commforter does speek.
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:02:00 PM
Wow, well done. You have here a quatran, a poem with all 4 line stanzas and Rhyme, combo. All good indeed. We need a combo categories and certain form like. Amen, and keep on praising Him. Blessings
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Anna Sander
Date: 6/1/2018 6:41:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend:)
Date: 1/17/2018 2:50:00 PM
Some lovely lines in this spiritual poem..
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Anna Sander
Date: 1/17/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/30/2017 5:25:00 PM
Anna, Love seeks those who understands it. Good write
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Anna Sander
Date: 12/30/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, Carlos.....true indeed! ??
Date: 12/28/2017 6:13:00 AM
The truth is.......He is not far off from any of us......sweet poem Anna
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Anna Sander
Date: 12/29/2017 8:36:00 AM
He's not far at all.......all we have to do is reach out. Thank you, Jerry.
Date: 12/28/2017 4:50:00 AM
Anna, in catching up on my reading, I got around to reading your poem. The presence of God is so real when we truly believe in Him. It's just as you so vividly described it. Those who don't believe can't experience His presence even though He is with them as well. Nicely written piece.
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Anna Sander
Date: 12/29/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Curtis. Your words are so true.
Date: 12/22/2017 8:06:00 PM
Lovely poem...Angels wings brush by me, Sweet breath of heaven’s dew" A perfect conclusion... All the best Anna
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Anna Sander
Date: 12/22/2017 9:09:00 PM
Thank you! You are so very kind! Merry Christmas!

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