God's Kind of Poetry

I formed the poet to be my clay pen
To dance on the pin tip of my understanding
I delight in words
All things came into existance through my words
The planets
The stars
The moon
The sun
The universes beyond what you can see
They are tethered by my imagination
I am a God of order
I delight in repetition
My ways are perfect
What you see a chaos, fits perfectly into my plans
I occupy all the spaces
I exist within each breath
My energy flows from beginning to end and back again
I allow you to glimpse my shadow 
For my full Glory would consume your human form
I am beyond your comprehension
Yet I wish you to know me
Ponder me
Come into my loving arms
My words are written on ancient scrolls
Each verse contains my essence
My invitation to a wondorous feast
Taste the succulence of my bounty
The flavours my affection
My consummate Love
Do not be concerned with the temporary
Trust in my grace
For I know all your needs
This world will one day disappear 
Paradise will reside under your feet
I will be your completion 
Dancing will have new meaning
Rivers will sparkle like diamonds
The skies will no longer need the sun
For I will be your light
We will walk through a new Jerusalem
Streets of gold
Buildings encrusted in precious gems
Trees will be laden with fruit
No hunger
No tears
My children will know freedom
Strength will course through veins
Angels will walk in their midsts
Age will no longer be their enemy
Death will be a forgotten memory
For I am God
My words
My poetry
They can be your reality
Make use of your free will
I am bound by my own promises
You must choose my path
Be a vessel of my Love
You my clay pen
Can flow
With golden ink



For this contest I am asked to write from the perspective of God.
It is an insurmountable task for one as limited as myself. I humbly
submit this attempt and pray that it honors my heavenly Father.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 11:56 PM
This is so outstanding Richard! I am happy to see it at the top. Big Congratulations on your win!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Connie.
Nance Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Wonderful! grats on your contest win
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Casarah.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Yes indeed it has honoured The heavenly father Richard! amazing words here, congrats on top place win!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Upma.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Richard you can come up with such amazing poetry, and you do it a LOT. BIG congrats on your win with this wonder!!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 10:23 AM
What a nice thing to say, thanks Andrea.
Jamoner Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Congratz on your win! Such a nice poem!
Delaney Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations Richard Full of promise and beauty.
Hicks Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:39 AM
This is fantastic, Rick!! So many thoughts to ponder... "I allow you to glimpse my shadow"... I can't help but think of that section in the Bible where it talks about Moses seeing "the back parts of the Lord"... I've always wondered what in the world that must have looked like. I also LOVE the last three lines of this poem. It puts the thought into my head that WE ourselves are really not that impressive... just dirt. But with God our actions can bring forth great thinks... aka golden ink. Fave!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:33 AM
In writing this I tried to glean as much as I could from my knowledge of scripture. I appreciate your response Timothy.
Johnston Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Part 1: Oh Richard, your pen flows with golden ink already! And your poem somehow even divines the title for my next Poetry contest on both PoemHunter and Poetry soup which I announce here in tribute to your excellent poem. The title of the new Challenge Title (for those of you who wish to get a head start on your competition is 'Words - The Heart of Immagination? ' Isn't it amazing how this new title fits in with your poem's theological foundation?
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Wow, what a great way to start my day. Thanks for your affirming comments.
Johnston Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Or is this not mere coincidence but somehow point to the fact that all True Poetry is in fact 'God's Kind of Poetry? ' In your poem God's Grace truly becomes palpable, the scent that crowns all scents, the drink that ends all thirst! God and I are tight and I can assure you that this poem has honored God and honors God again every time it is read by mortal man!
Devonshire Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Dear Richard, I admire your faith as well as this beautiful poem. You have a great deal of spiritual insight woven into your words. I especially enjoyed the line "What you see a chaos, fits perfectly into my plans." Indeed, I believe He has a plan even though we sometimes don't understand it. My prayers ask Him for guidance. Congratulations on your first place win! Love, Carolyn
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Carolyn, I hope you feel better soon.
Devonshire Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 11:02 PM
PS - I've been dealing with a cold/flu and hope to be more active on the site when I feel better. Hard to think with a headache and fever. Keep sharing, Richard!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 10:48 PM
Congratulations Richard on such a great win. Well deserved with this outstanding poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Brenda.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Beautiful. Thank you. I truly love this one. Congratulations and God bless you. With love and prayers, Gina
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Regina, may he bless you as well.
Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Yes indeed God is within you. Congrad's Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:39 AM
He is within all of us yet some people seach everywhere else but within themselves.
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Back again Richard; I had no doubt this would be a winner, and being awarded a top placing is very merited. Congrats!! // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:43 AM
You are kind Paul.
Yvonne Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Johnson Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 10:21 AM
This is a wonderful poem. A great and worthy winner. Love, Joyce
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 7:58 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Kayode.
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:03 AM
A delightful verse, Richard, congrats on the win,
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Simply outstanding Richard many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:03 AM
I'm so glad to see your name here, Richard. You are a spiritual man...and it shows in your writes. Congrats on your top win! I'm so proud of you! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Thanks and a big hug back to you.
Sirak Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 8:45 AM
This poem definitely honors Him. You praise and glorify God with every word!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Monterey, I enjoyed your blog and sisters poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:21 PM
A MASTERPIECE Richard! You words act as a healing balm to those searching for relief, needing faith and hope to carry on. You have supplied that in this brilliant entry. A #7 and into my fav's. Blessings, Connie
Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Wow, thanks Connie!
Callus Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 1:19 PM
This is a delight to read Richard. As humans we can never do Him full justice, but you have gone a long way to do so. There are moments in this write that remind me of David and his psalms. gl in the contest. (a 7 rating...) // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:07 AM
What a tremendously uplifting comment Paul. Thanks!
Manassian Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM
:) Bless you for this awesome piece. The truth shines like diamonds. I've put some of these thoughts in my course syllabus. God is a God of beauty and order and we need to see that and live by it. Love and hugs.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:26 AM
I cannot do Him justice, all I can do is praise Him. Thanks for the love and hug.
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:22 AM
A great write, you did him proud. God Bless.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Maurice! God bless you as well.
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Well done Richard.. He will be happy you used your gift so eloquently... Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Thanks and goodnight Tim.
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