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God's Aging Vessel

I often lie awake and ponder life, more kind than cruel through my many years. The peaceful times by far outweigh the strife, and laughs have flowed more frequently than tears. The future--my tomorrows, oh, so brief-- holds challenges. I look to God each day, for He knows all. It’s still my firm belief He has a plan, and He’ll show me the way. The past is an instructor I respect for guiding me through failure and success. The present is the path that will direct me to tomorrow’s fleeting happiness. Life beckons. God is working on me still. He’ll bless me if I strive to do His will. Posted May 20, 2019 May 20, 2019, entered in Sara Kendrick's Choices Poetry Contest June 27, 2019, entered in Julia Ward's Favourite Poem from May 2019 Contest Placed 9th of 10 July 7, 2019, entered in John Hamilton's Best Sonnet 2019 Contest March 9, 2021 entered in Brian Strand's All Yours (March 10) Contest Placed 1st

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Date: 7/22/2019 10:40:00 AM
Lovely sonnet, Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/22/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 7/6/2019 5:34:00 PM
Appreciative beauty flows through your exceptional and meaningful Sonnet, Janice. I especially loved; ‘laughs have flowed more frequently than tears’ - simply stunning! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/7/2019 6:44:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much for this lovely comment. Janice
Date: 7/6/2019 4:37:00 PM
"laughs have flowed more frequently than tears."-- This line made me feel so grateful because I must admit the same and realize that not everyone can. Enjoyed your worshipful sonnet! Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/7/2019 6:43:00 PM
P.S., thank you for this lovely comment. Janice
Date: 7/6/2019 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations for your win in my contest, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/7/2019 6:42:00 PM
Julia, THANK YOU so much for my win! Janice
Date: 5/27/2019 2:44:00 PM
Great sonnet Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/27/2019 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 5/24/2019 10:55:00 AM
I entered this contest but I love this interpretation of this theme!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/24/2019 10:57:00 AM
IF I SAY THREE TIMES , THAT MEANS IT HAS TO WIN SOMETHING.
Date: 5/21/2019 7:30:00 AM
This is an outside the box interpretation of the contest photo..a meaningful insight on life through this metaphor..well done, Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/21/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! That last boat looked as if it still had some "sailing" ability--like me. LOL! Janice
Date: 5/20/2019 5:18:00 PM
This is brilliant, Janice both in content and flow. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/20/2019 5:21:00 PM
Wendy, THANKS for this great review and for catching the typo! Janice

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