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God Told Me

Nothing is more remarkable than my pen with which, this poet comprehends her muse, in flowing poetry: a destiny that has drawn inviolable, circles around me. Nothing felt real, a sense of unreality came, until, finally, a realization . . . I had a moment of unquiet when my poetry, was ravaged, like a tatterdemalion, ragged thing. I lingered long with the poem, weeping, a soft wind was breathing on my window, and a bird were twittering just beyond, and I felt crushed, my heart shattered. Was it jealousy that made you do it, are you so insecure and resentful. A poet I am: not one whose name destiny, will forget to eternize but one whose writing, will be immortal, this is written by God himself, in the Book of my Life, it is God who gave me, this gift of writing . . . and I promise that nothing in this earthly realm, will destroy what God himself, has set in motion, oh the wall is high that protects me, God put it there himself, but sorrow is still mine, my weeping is real, for no wall is that strong to shield my heart, that strength must come from within, this is what . . . God told me. ______________________________ August 30, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/God Told Me Copyright Protected, ID 15-704-746-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Jealousy, sponsor, Skat Second Place

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Date: 9/18/2015 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful job BW. I love the title, it gives me an opening to share with you something that "God Told Me" just this morning, or rather put together in prospective for me. In [Rev. 22:1-3 kjv] The 'pure river of the water of life', is the dynamic and/or supernatural energy of God's love particles flowing from God otherwise identified by scientist as God particles 'Higgs Bosom' or Adamantine particles or particles of infinity. These particles represent the generic building blocks of all mass.
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Date: 9/18/2015 1:10:00 PM
By the way, beautiful poem!! Agape Moses
Date: 9/18/2015 3:47:00 AM
Yes, God's wisdom is really on fire on this poem! Congrats, Broken.
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Date: 9/17/2015 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your win
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:37:00 PM
BW, congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:31:00 PM
Wonderful write on jealousy broken n a great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Broken... A wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:33:00 PM
Amen my sister Amen....we all feel pain every now and then....But With God On my team I continue to float....down the sea of Life, Jesus Is The Name Of my Boat.....;)
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Date: 8/30/2015 4:01:00 PM
This is Great Broken Wings and we must share what God has given to us thru this gift and touch the souls who were meant to read it. God will bless you for your Obedience. Blessings Carl
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Date: 8/30/2015 3:45:00 PM
The Holy Spirit leading you so awesome the recognition of love Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:37:00 PM
WOW! BW, I heard your message loud and clear. The ink that you possess is a gift from God. Excellent job!:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:10:00 AM
Such the awe inspiring testimony dear poet! (((((bravo))))) And yes, I have discovered your specific angst within your writes, and have not and would never deter such the gift you relish and engross your fans with. Infact, I come specifically to your post to defuse some of my own angst that I emphatcally for some raison de'etre can not find the courage to write about, the thoughts won't spill on mine slip! They are always writes which I trash when finished. LOL And I am happy to where I am with my shares, I love smiling when I write, I love goosebumps, I love the salacious sweats as well ! *sm Have a wonderful week Constance.Much love, james
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Date: 8/30/2015 9:21:00 AM
- Words from your pen belongs to your thoughts, feelings and heart, dear B.W. - Beautiful as always - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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