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God Knows Where I Am

God Knows Where I Am Except for docs and pills that work, I’d know not where I am. Frightening to learn and really see the lean tightrope I walk. “Linda, Linda rest in peace. If only you’d let go and trusted just a little bit. What healing you might know.” It’s hard to say where true fault lies around her or within. The cracks were wide that she slipped through to bide ten miles away. With God’s great grace she lived a year on apples and rainwater, and in due time He called to rest the bane of his loved daughter. Each day of life, I ask in prayer, “Dear Father keep my mind.” And give thanks for a balanced state of rationality. 6/1/17

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Date: 6/2/2017 7:46:00 AM
A very moving story well portrayed in these lines, Janis :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/4/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 6/2/2017 7:33:00 AM
Such a sad loss Janis. This is brilliantly written. I hope this is a top winner! : ) 7 Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/4/2017 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Connie. I have been looking at a lot of movies set in Hawaii and it has amazed me that to get to the other islands from some islands you have to fly. I thought you could just make a short trip by boat. Must be vast.
Date: 6/2/2017 3:03:00 AM
- Beautiful and deeply touching, Janis - Best wishes in the contest and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/4/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thanks and blessing Anne-Lise.

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