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Gnarled

Gnarled tree rooted firm, fallen bark, abundant earthen ground cradles. Horned larks and thrushes beat their wings, wavering within sun's gold rays. Lace shade dance a hush call, seep by a calm sigh and the incessant babbling of an adjoining brook. Delicious breeze, reviving kiss, entice utter lull in veiled dream. A world, a marriage joined as one, desire of only pleasant warmth. A muse of chill wind and aching darkness that stirs snow fall with wings. The old bare and brittle, gnarled limbs gaze out towards humble night sky.

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Date: 10/8/2023 11:28:00 PM
Eve, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the relaxing music, Constance
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on a win!
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Date: 10/3/2023 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem with vivid imagery. Nice win,
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Date: 10/2/2023 4:16:00 AM
I knew as soon as I saw the title that I would love it. I do I do lovely imagery its a fav and a 7 hugs Shadow
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:44:00 PM
“Darkness that stirs snow fall with wings” love that and also your opening line and how you’ve used the word gnarled to describe roots of tree and something much mor deeper and meaningful woven in such descriptive diction blew me away! Love this one. Fave for me
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:51:00 AM
You created so much imagery in this one... each line full of it.. a lovely poem my friend..
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:38:00 AM
I agree with Victor! You are a master of imagery! Best wishes for contest!
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Date: 10/1/2023 1:46:00 AM
Simply beautiful and original. A poem to relish. Cannot but fav it. Deserves a high placing in the contest. Hugs.
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