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Gloaming Time

Another sun sets Prelude to a starry sky The night is coming

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 9:44:00 PM

a pretty gem. I have always loved the word gloaming too. Congrats on the win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 10:06:00 PM

congrats Robert on HM for another brilliant write luv.. great title too..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2012 2:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this great descriptive work..It was destined to be a winner..Congrats on your win..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 9:19:00 PM

Congrats, Robert! I love your haiku. Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 4:02:00 PM

Robert, I love a good haiku, this is one. Form wise, it's spot on. I have read this 10 times and each time I find new meanings, that is the mark of a fine work. Excellent job and congrats on winning HM in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2012 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Robert. Love, Carol