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Gloaming Glory

Gloaming Glory

Fiery orb of living luminous light 
    descending slowly before the 
        sea at the edge of the horizon, 

I am one with you, connected 
    through the cosmos divinely. 
          Your photosynthesis runs through
                my veins like the pliant plants.

As I close my eyes in contemplation
    I may still elegantly envision your 
          bright ball of golden glow. 

A denizen of diamonds coruscates
    undulating across the sea 
          leading a path to you in your 
                most glorious moments.

I reach out my arms to you as you 
    reach out your last rays to embrace 
          me with your loving crimson colors.
                I bathe baptized by your beauty.

In breathless sighs I gasp at your bonniness
    blessing me as I reveal my soul is
          connected to you and through you. 

Let me savor each moment before you 
    vanish, sinking beneath the sea, near me,
          and all becomes blush, hushed in 
                temporary terrestrial mourning 
                    of your absence.  Adieu sweet Sol!

4-11-20

~First Place~
Slipping Soul Sunsets into the Sea Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 

Happy Easter Everyone!

My thanks to this site for the picture: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-zxYmD2Wb-fs/TiQEXx7haI/AAAAAAAAEig/X21CDD9G6wk/s1600/Island+Sunset+Wallpapers+3.jpg
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Hamilton Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:23 AM
I had to pass by again, worthy of a second read, enjoyed it even more, wonderful phrasing, denizen of diamonds coruscates...Indeed!
Barden Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Beautiful, Connie ... I hope you are well.
Kaufman Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:15 PM
kudos Ms. Connie..wonderful work
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 2:00 AM
Creativity at its best, passion digging deepest. Your voice is powerful here. What an excellent piece.
Hamilton Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Congrats Connie on this wonderful winning poem!
Babbit Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Beautifully written, congrats on your win.
Blodgett Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Sol is soul in this wonderfully worded poem. Love this Connie. Congrats to you as well
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Back at least a third time, this time to say congrats on your win . This one much deserved to be on the winners' list. I know times are difficult and the muse is hard to get these days. Keep being safe, my dear friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Yes, I have been kind of quiet this past month. Thank you for your support. xxoo
Adams Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 2:30 PM
I knew this one was a beauty when I read it the first time... I am not surprised to see it shining as a first place winner, congratulations Connie... love this one … hugs XoXo
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much Sandra. I have been searching for my muse lately. She makes brief appearances. : ) xxoo
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April 25, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Incredible. I saw the same. Wonderful words.
Horsman Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Wow i'm weeks behind, in comments, but this poetry will remain as fresh forever, as the subject matter of this amazing gem of a poem..Love the word, 'Bonniness' One imagines, the whole poem being such!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 9:02 AM
I’m glad you are both keeping safe. Hugs Rick.
Warrior Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Superbly rendered my dear friend...stay safe Connie...may the sun comfort you...^WW^ :o)
Callus Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 12:42 PM
Excellent imagery, Connie! What a lovely loving relationship between you and the sun! ~ Wishing you more lovely sunsets and a nice weekend, my friend. // paul
DiMino Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Amazing write, Connie; those moments of oneness, when truly there with heaven on earth are treasures to behold. Oh, having power to extent divine realization in our minds and hearts for even a wee bit longer!--blessed are the writers, for his and her mission of enchanting longevity. Glorious read!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 11:44 AM
A delightful poem that was a sheer joy to read dearest, Connie! Take good care my dearest friend!
Kiser Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 3:13 PM
I now have a new Fav; this is tranquil.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Thank you very much M.L. Poetry is one of my joys that keep my happy and busy. God bless xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for your visit. Yes I am well, a bit bored but well. ;0) I hope you are well also. Hugs Rick.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 4:47 PM
I am Richard. Keeping inside with my husband. We are both in the high risk category. We only go out maybe once a week or two for food. xxoo
Walker Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Connie, a lovely poem which is a pleasure to read. All the best, Sonia.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Sonia. My husband and I are keeping busy at home. Keep safe. xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 8:14 PM
This is a beauty. Gorgeously portrayed Connie. Hugs Rick.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thank you very much Richard. I hope you are well. xxoo
Raven Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Hi Connie, the imagery in this excellent write is outstanding. It gives a true peace to the heart. You spread such light with this wonderful poetic gem. A definite Fav. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment and Fave Mike. I hope you received my part of our collaboration? I will post it here shortly. xxoo
Salehi Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Very pretty my dear...
Ball Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 6:02 AM
WoW! Connie This is beautiful and the pic is perfect. This is first place winner for sure, God Bless, JB
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Judy. The subject inspired me. Stay safe xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Such a transporting ode to the beauty of the sunset, I think this will do well in the contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Thank you Michelle. I can't be online every day but I spend as much time as I can reading poetry. xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 5:29 PM
thanks for the sweet message on my Hm'd poem yesterday! Let me see if I've yet seen your other recent post here yet.
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