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Glitter

GLITTER Christmas Eve on a cold winter’s night. My children, the diamonds of my life, Stand in the garden and, breathless, See the heavens alight with a host of candles, Their sprinkle of diamond-fresh points Like God’s holy yule-tree garlands. The prosaic stars coruscate in the blink Of the evening’s twinkle and are quenched by the cloud. The frozen dappled stream in the moonlight as it breaks Into low waves lapping over barely-perceived rocks Bears a necklace of diamonds in silver chainlink. The village blacksmith strikes his sparks white-hot In the darkness of the forge and they splash fountain-like From the anvil and break asunder in a thousand Tiny splashlets of hot but not yet moulded forms. The childen’s minds glitter when they perceive A novel idea and the shining thought enters Their eyes and voices, creating a cascade Glittering and twinkling as their minds are sprinkled With this holy water, at once hot and cold, And these thoughts and inklings break asunder In young splashlets not yet moulded, to form The unquenchable silver diamonds of life.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in Nette Onclaud’s Contest GLOW OF GLITTER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Glow Of Glitter" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2011 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem :) Best regards, Jon
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Date: 12/31/2011 11:38:00 AM
Great write Syd,,congratulations on the 1st place win..)
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:07:00 PM
wonderful attitude and great to win with it too..ahhh..our children they can shine so bright! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:12:00 PM
Sidney, wonderful that your children ar the diamond of your life. Happy New year to you dear friend and congratulations on a worthy first place victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:43:00 AM
wowowow. I SEE how this got first place. A very well deserved win on your poem that rings with imagery of glitter!! Congrats.
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Date: 12/30/2011 9:45:00 AM
i love "my children, the diamonds of my life" great analogy. congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:29:00 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL.
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:12:00 AM
Congraulations x
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Date: 12/30/2011 12:46:00 AM
Resonant imagery...the glitter was everywhere in your...inspirations make the mind glow till it mature into works.
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Date: 12/29/2011 3:19:00 PM
Sydney-The vocab used is superb and laced with amazing descriptions..everything about this is glitter! Love the tiny splashlets of hot but not yet moulded forms. Very powerful write,. Gwendolen
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