Glitter

GLITTER


Christmas Eve on a cold winter’s night.
My children, the diamonds of my life, 
Stand in the garden and, breathless,
See the heavens alight with a host of candles,
Their  sprinkle of diamond-fresh points
Like God’s holy yule-tree garlands.
The prosaic stars coruscate in the blink 
Of the evening’s twinkle and are quenched by the cloud.
The frozen dappled stream in the moonlight as it breaks
Into  low waves lapping over barely-perceived rocks
Bears  a necklace of diamonds in silver chainlink.
The village blacksmith strikes his sparks white-hot 
In the darkness of the forge and they splash fountain-like 
From the anvil and break asunder in a thousand 
Tiny splashlets of hot but not yet moulded forms.
The childen’s minds glitter when they perceive
A novel idea and the shining thought enters 
Their eyes and voices, creating a cascade
Glittering and twinkling as their minds are sprinkled
With this holy water, at once hot and cold,
And these thoughts and inklings break asunder 
In young splashlets not yet moulded, to form 
The unquenchable silver diamonds of life.. . . . . . 

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Written  by  Sydney Peck

Entered  in   Nette Onclaud’s   Contest    GLOW OF GLITTER
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Glow Of Glitter" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Arno Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem :) Best regards, Jon
Maverick Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Great write Syd,,congratulations on the 1st place win..)
Guzzi Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 2:07 PM
wonderful attitude and great to win with it too..ahhh..our children they can shine so bright! Congrad's Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Sidney, wonderful that your children ar the diamond of your life. Happy New year to you dear friend and congratulations on a worthy first place victory. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:43 AM
wowowow. I SEE how this got first place. A very well deserved win on your poem that rings with imagery of glitter!! Congrats.
Susan Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 9:45 AM
i love "my children, the diamonds of my life" great analogy. congrats on your win!
Okwudili Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 2:29 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 2:12 AM
Congraulations x
Okonkwo Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Resonant imagery...the glitter was everywhere in your...inspirations make the mind glow till it mature into works.
Song Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Sydney-The vocab used is superb and laced with amazing descriptions..everything about this is glitter! Love the tiny splashlets of hot but not yet moulded forms. Very powerful write,. Gwendolen
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