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Glass Slipper in Moonshine

Midnight came and went as perilous as a wolf howling at the moon. —by poet
Tease of time, palpitating pearls, she’s flirting with the bluest eyes, framed in heaven’s clouds. Girlish curls capture a sigh and peer clockwise. With princess charm, she winked, half-turned to run, ascend the starry night. One glass slipper in moonshine; spurned like a pauper in class-ignite. Will the foolish prince sip from the glass?

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Date: 4/11/2025 7:47:00 AM
Brilliant I love this gem, congratulations
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Date: 4/9/2025 6:16:00 AM
Perfect Kim. Always a pleasure to read your work. Congratulations! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2025 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 4/8/2025 11:25:00 PM
This is genius. "A glass slipper in moonshine, will the prince sip from the glass" wow!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2025 6:49:00 AM
As always a pleasure, Paige!! Thank you, dear one!
Date: 4/7/2025 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2025 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Hugs
Date: 4/7/2025 12:05:00 PM
- Back with a congratulation, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2025 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 4/7/2025 8:05:00 AM
Your poem evokes a distinct sense of charm, nuanced feelings, and imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2025 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 4/6/2025 11:02:00 AM
Real charm to this poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2025 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 4/6/2025 10:30:00 AM
A great tale that gives shivers. Good luck with the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2025 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 4/5/2025 9:44:00 PM
Love the title and the narrative, Kim. ~ Glassy Ide
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2025 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 4/5/2025 6:55:00 AM
Innovative lines, Kim. I found this poem fascinating. I observe a youth sprinting in the darkness. Wishing you the best of success in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2025 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 4/4/2025 10:19:00 PM
If for Constance. See title requirement
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2025 5:06:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/4/2025 10:18:00 PM
I really like this. Awesome end line
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2025 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 4/4/2025 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts in the midnight moonshine.Very nce.NA
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2025 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Akham!
Date: 4/4/2025 3:42:00 PM
Creative lines, Kim. I enjoyed reading this one. I can see a young person running around in the moonlight. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/4/2025 12:28:00 PM
Reads like a fairytale Kim, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 4/4/2025 12:13:00 PM
Who can resist blue eyes and girlish blonde curls? But only if she's the marrying type ;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 12:59:00 PM
LOL..but only if… Thank you, Tom :)
Date: 4/4/2025 12:08:00 PM
Nice poem with a fairy tale feeling. Good one Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Date: 4/4/2025 11:53:00 AM
- Like in the fairy tale about Cinderella ... beautiful, Kim :) - Good luck :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 11:55:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs!
Date: 4/4/2025 11:50:00 AM
Enchanting -- gloriously foolish. Intellectually, no man is a match for a woman. Brain Power in excess.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 11:57:00 AM
LOL! So true…the elixir draws in the prince…the princess foolishly wants the apple offered by the serpent, why? Shrugging

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