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Glass Slipper in Moonshine

Midnight came and went as perilous as a wolf howling at the moon.
—by poet

Tease of time, palpitating pearls, she’s flirting with the bluest eyes, framed in heaven’s clouds. Girlish curls capture a sigh and peer clockwise. With princess charm, she winked, half-turned to run, ascend the starry night. One glass slipper in moonshine; spurned like a pauper in class-ignite. Will the foolish prince sip from the glass?
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Miller Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 7:47 AM
Brilliant I love this gem, congratulations
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:16 AM
Perfect Kim. Always a pleasure to read your work. Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Hind Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:25 PM
This is genius. "A glass slipper in moonshine, will the prince sip from the glass" wow!!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:49 AM
As always a pleasure, Paige!! Thank you, dear one!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win...................
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Paula! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:05 PM
- Back with a congratulation, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Poet Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Your poem evokes a distinct sense of charm, nuanced feelings, and imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Bayles Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Real charm to this poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:30 AM
A great tale that gives shivers. Good luck with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Love the title and the narrative, Kim. ~ Glassy Ide
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Poet Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 6:55 AM
Innovative lines, Kim. I found this poem fascinating. I observe a youth sprinting in the darkness. Wishing you the best of success in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:19 PM
If for Constance. See title requirement
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:18 PM
I really like this. Awesome end line
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Singh Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Beautiful thoughts in the midnight moonshine.Very nce.NA
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Akham!
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Creative lines, Kim. I enjoyed reading this one. I can see a young person running around in the moonlight. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Reads like a fairytale Kim, best of luck in the contest. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Mckeithan Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Nice poem with a fairy tale feeling. Good one Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:53 AM
- Like in the fairy tale about Cinderella ... beautiful, Kim :) - Good luck :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Thank you! Hugs!
DiMino Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Enchanting -- gloriously foolish. Intellectually, no man is a match for a woman. Brain Power in excess.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:57 AM
LOL! So true…the elixir draws in the prince…the princess foolishly wants the apple offered by the serpent, why? Shrugging
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