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Glass Slipper

Cinderella had a shoe made of glass Gave an opportunity too good to pass The prince she wed Mean sisters fled Went from poverty straight to upper class

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:31:00 PM

BARBARA..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2011 9:12:00 AM

Congrats BG on a magnificent win in the Shoes contest ....

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/7/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats, Barb. Excellent piece. Nice going All the best. luv Ralph

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2011 10:40:00 PM

BARBARA~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT

Jack Horne

Date: 3/8/2011 7:16:00 AM

LOL I work at a theatre and this one makes me think of last year's panto, which was Cinderella : ) Jack Thanks for your kind comments, Barbara

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/7/2011 7:19:00 AM

Good one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 12:12:00 AM

Cool way to approach the contest, Barbara, the Cinderella story! wouldn't you like to be that one whose foot slid into the glass slipper? Luv ya, Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/5/2011 9:19:00 PM

It's too bad we all don't have fairy godmothers like Cinderella had. My fairy godmother could let me know the six Powerball numbers that will be drawn next Wednesday night. Just correct "to" in the second line to "too", and this limerick will be close to perfect.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/5/2011 6:56:00 PM

Very cute Limerick...good luck in the contest..Jimmy

William Kershaw

Date: 2/5/2011 5:02:00 PM

Well Done! Reads like a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks so much for your kind comments on my stuff. I have been ill and so am remiss in replyimg to my PS friends. Love, Will

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2011 9:36:00 AM

charming, barbara!! winning wishes in the contest..:) hugggs, nette

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/5/2011 9:28:00 AM

A cute read this morning. God Bless phyl

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/5/2011 7:12:00 AM

haha. the last line is superb. All the best for the contest.