Glass Slipper

Cinderella had a shoe made of glass
Gave an opportunity too good to pass
The prince she wed
Mean sisters fled
Went from poverty straight to upper class
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM
BARBARA..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Congrats BG on a magnificent win in the Shoes contest ....
Taylor Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Congrats, Barb. Excellent piece. Nice going All the best. luv Ralph
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November 6, 2011 at 10:40 PM
BARBARA~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
Horne Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:16 AM
LOL I work at a theatre and this one makes me think of last year's panto, which was Cinderella : ) Jack Thanks for your kind comments, Barbara
Fillmore Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Good one!
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:12 AM
Cool way to approach the contest, Barbara, the Cinderella story! wouldn't you like to be that one whose foot slid into the glass slipper? Luv ya, Andrea
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February 5, 2011 at 9:19 PM
It's too bad we all don't have fairy godmothers like Cinderella had. My fairy godmother could let me know the six Powerball numbers that will be drawn next Wednesday night. Just correct "to" in the second line to "too", and this limerick will be close to perfect.
Anderson Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 6:56 PM
Very cute Limerick...good luck in the contest..Jimmy
Kershaw Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Well Done! Reads like a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks so much for your kind comments on my stuff. I have been ill and so am remiss in replyimg to my PS friends. Love, Will
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 9:36 AM
charming, barbara!! winning wishes in the contest..:) hugggs, nette
Babcock Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 9:28 AM
A cute read this morning. God Bless phyl
Mannan Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 7:12 AM
haha. the last line is superb. All the best for the contest.
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