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A non contest poem.

Glaciers dance with Newton's laws

In the stillness of frost, the glacier rests,
Bound by the law of inertia’s quest.
Silent and steady, it clings to the land,
Until gravity whispers its gentle command.

A force unseen begins the glide,
Massive and ancient, it cannot hide.
For Newton spoke: F = ma,
And so the glacier carves its way.

Downward it presses, a relentless might,
Through valleys and time, both day and night.
The ice grinds rock in a cold embrace,
Shaping the earth, leaving its trace.

But action meets reaction's call,
As the glacier leans, the earth stands tall.
The ground pushes back with an equal refrain,
And meltwater flows where the ice once reigned.

From towering peaks to rivers below,
The laws of motion direct the flow.
A timeless tale of ice and stone,
Where Newton’s wisdom is clearly shown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniel Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 2:54 AM
This is really well done, Jay, as Andrea said, it should be entered in DD's contest:)
George Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 10:33 PM
Great poem. Besides being a poet, you are a man with a scientific bent of mind. How beautifully you have applied Newton's Laws of Motion and Laws of Kinetic energy to the sliding of glaciers! Well done, dear friend.
Rodgers Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Hello Jay, What a wonderful poem with exquisite rhymes and flow. Newton, I believe, is one of the smartest people of all time. Just a brilliant mind! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Ain't nature wonderful, and you describe it so well Jay, I really enjoyed reading this today :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 1:43 PM
I enjoyed Reading your wonderful write. It needs to be in the contest. ~Please~ "Good Luck" with this one. Have a fun day writing away.......................
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 1:08 PM
This is very good. Why not use it in the contest? It looks like that one contest of Dilly Dally's themes.
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