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Give me the Rhythm

Stream of life pulsates boulder to boulder sometimes so quiet and sometimes so loud sound of heartbeats get older and older, symphony of birds in the Evening cloud. While the Moon is resting deep in my heart sky of my dreams roll tumultuous waves. Hope in thunderstorms embraces restart in stars and fate together, boundless craves. Without an umbrella, I walk in rain, as fragile leaves salsa in joyous sway Rippling lake mirrors oak trees in a chain rhythm of graveyard, memories in array. Only when butterflies flip-flap in tandem, It's Pure Joy...give me the rhythm that's random. 10 syllables in each line, checked in howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 6/15/2025 6:55:00 AM
Mitra, your sonnet is really poignant—your imagery and wording are so lovely. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 6/15/2025 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Miranda's sonnet contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:01:00 AM
Hi Debjani Well done a lovely sonnet congrats on your win too Cheers Christine
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Date: 6/13/2025 12:34:00 PM
Great sonnet Debjani, enjoyed the read, congrats on a worthy win!
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Date: 6/13/2025 2:24:00 AM
Love the imagery! Congratulations
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Date: 6/12/2025 10:06:00 PM
Your opening line is just melodic, and the moon resting deep in your heart now that is just a thought for pondering. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 6/4/2025 5:58:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet this is, and i love your rhymes and cadence of your word weaving as well as how you’ve written “Hope in thunderstorms embraces restart stars and fate together, in boundless craves.” Soulfully moving and so very touching! Pleasure reading this impeccable write: best wishes. Sending you light always
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